Originally Posted by scorpion king
Nice attempt. However, if following points are included then it would be sound a bit better.
POSITIVE SIDE OF WOMEN RIGHTS IN PAKISTAN OR ROLE OF WOMEN
EFFORTS FOR ENSURING WOMEN RIGHTS
1; Women Protection bill
2:Various commissions on women rights(NCSW,CEDAW,WAF,WAR, AWRAT FOUNDATION some other NGOs), Ministry of women development,.
Thnx alot dear...i have explained the role of women in my essay, but wud be nice of u if u kindly explain the organizational role of women..
and dear i have restricted myself to the topic and tried to write according to its requirements thats y i havnt explained the points like women protection bill and various commission and so on.....wud it be appropriate to xplain them here...?