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Brother it is nice Essay. Nice introduction But Conclusion is not extracted from Essay. Moreover few things i want to discuss. Given below:

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Outline Must be:

• Introduction

• What Is Terrorism

• Islam’s Response To Terrorism: ( No need to write this because it is not required in essay but you can discuss this thing in remedies.

• Causes Of Terrorism:

1. Internal Causes

a) Socio-Economic Causes
i) Injustice:
ii) Illiteracy:
iii) Poverty And Unemployment:
iv) Food Insecurity:
v) Dissatisfaction:

b) Political Causes:
i) Non-Democratic Set-Up:
ii) Improper Government Set-Up
iii) Absence Of Law And Failure Of Law Enforcement Agencies:

c) Religious Causes:
i) Role Of Madrassahs: ( In your essay you openly blame Madarssah's. Which is not totally wrong, But blame concerned Madrassah Which are engaging themselves in such immoral activites. Lets Suppose, If any Molana or Orthodox professor check your Essay, he wont spare you for the comments you gave in this paragraph )
ii) Religious Intolerance:

2. External Causes
a) Afghan War: 1979
b) Iranian Revolution:
c) War On Terrorism: 9/11

• Factors Boosting Terrorism: ( I dont think so it is required )
a) Anti-Terrorism Campaign And Drone Strikes:
b) Negligence Of Government:
c) Persecution Of Innocent Muslims In Kashmir And Palestine:

• Steps Taken By Pakistan: ( Include This In remedies )
a) Ban On Terrorist Organisation
b) Operation Rah-E-Nijat
c) Operation Rah-E-Rast

• Impacts Of Terrorism:

a) Civilian Loss
b) Economic Cost Of Terrorism:
i) Agriculture Loss:
ii) Manufacturing Cost:
iii) Declining Foreign Direct Investment:
iv) Diminishing Tourism:
v) Internally Displaced People/internal Migration

c) Social Impacts;

d) Political Impacts:

e) Psychological Impacts:

f) Religious Impacts:

• Remedies: ( Make it wide means, Write Bullet points below of remedies in your outline.

• Conclusion:
thnx dear for ur valuable suggestions...Regards
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