Jam sahib: The real cricketer.

The prince jam Sahib has ended excellent innings of his career and the stadium was silent . The great cricket has now become the part of happy past. Indian batsman will always be a symbol of his game neither because of his excellent record of 3000 runs with the average of 87,nor for the his best 200 against the powerful bowling team like Yorkshire but because of the fervor that he lend to the game as against the mechanical runs of Shrewsbury. Cricket is not hunting barren runs but also of playfulness, excitement and sensation. Jam’s talent lies not merely in making runs like machine but the sensation and excitement that he added to his game. Perhaps that's why he is as famous in his kingdom as he knows how to make others happy along with him. By Nosheen (words: 136)

well Done Nosheen no doubt your effort was very good. But dear you committed some grammatical mistakes and it may be due to quick typing. I have reshaped one line of your précis. Otherwise you have condensed the passage in an artful manner. Yea one more thing is about title, you have to condense it so I have deleted 2 words from your title.