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Originally Posted by Shabab Khan
Jam sahib, an Indian prince of a small state, is a great king of the Englishman's game of cricket. He not only has brilliant season's average of scoring runs and other record breaking statistics, but the way he gets runs is trully admirable. He plays in an adventerous, joyous and spirited fashion. Unlike few other batsmen, who are dull and mechanical in their approach and play the game as if conducting business, Jam sahib is full of passion and sportsman spirit. He brings great enthusiasm and unselfishness to the game of cricket. He is not only spectacular to watch in the playground but he is also loved and respected by people in his kingdom of Nawanagar because of his attitude of finding happiness in giving happiness.
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Shabab this time your work is laudable in the real sense. You have written a well knitted paragraph and condensed the passage skillfully but brother there is little mistake in giving a title. As the whole passage is about Jam Sahib so title should be
Jam Sahib: A True Sportsman I have reshaped only one line of your
précis just to attain the demand of words.
A True Sportsman
Jam sahib, an Indian prince of a small state, is a great king of the Englishman's game of cricket. He not only has brilliant season's average of scoring 3000 runs and other record breaking statistics, but the way he gets runs is truly admirable.
He scored against the best bowling team of Yorkshire and his adventurous, joyous and spirited fashion delight the spectators . Unlike few other batsmen, who are dull and mechanical in their approach and play the game as if conducting business, Jam sahib is full of passion and sportsman spirit. He brings great enthusiasm and unselfishness to the game of cricket. He is not only spectacular to watch in the playground but he is also loved and respected by people in his kingdom of Nawanagar because of his attitude of finding happiness in giving happiness.
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