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Originally Posted by Nosheen
To exceed in life man requires more work in less time. He first invent tools to save time and energy.It enabled him to get the best in different fields.Tools increase production in less time .From tools man deceloped big machines with the passage of time.These facts have to be taught to our farmers practically to make progress.In Advanced countries all agricultural activities are performed by machines efficiently from sowing to storing.In our country the farmer depend on weather for ploughing which lead to late sowing.Because of less man power and slow harvesting rain can ruine the crops.However using machines for ploughing and harvestin will result in better yield speedily.In this way every turn of weather can be utilized.
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Need of new ways in agriculture.
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Need of new ways in agriculture.
To exceed in life man requires more work in less time. He first invented tools to save time and energy. It enabled him to get the best in different fields. Tools increased production in less time. From tools man developed big machines. These facts have to be taught to our farmers practically to make progress. In Advanced countries all agricultural activities are performed by machines efficiently from sowing to storing. In our country the farmer depend on weather for ploughing which lead to late sowing. Because of less man power and slow harvesting rain can ruin the crops. However, machines for ploughing and harvesting result in better yield. In this way every turn of weather can be utilized and progress will be the natural outcome. (
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Well done Nosheen this time your work is really good, I have made a minute change in your passage and you can check it out. Actually it has 118 words so to make it exact there are little changes. But overall your work is really good. Keep working like this, Inshahallah you will make a good score in exams.