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Originally Posted by chemguy View Post
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Adversity can be defined as misery, affliction, tragedy, hardship, difficulty, or any unfavorable or critical(X) situation of life.

A critical situation isn't necessarily an adverse one.


Enhances real experience of life? That doesn't make any sense in the context.
Also, no 'he' before gets. It is implied because of the preceding subordinate clause.


No comma.

By the way, don't take the '1001' literally. I think what Edison meant was he worked hard and eventually it all paid. The '1001' number is a hyperbole

One more thing and I don't know whether this applies to CSS or not, but in writing, it is poor practice to write gender specific pronouns when meaning both genders. Like you used 'he' 9 times, when you could have used 'one'. You should confirm this from a CSP or some CSS teacher.
Thanks Dear. Which 9(He) are you talking about??
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