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Originally Posted by sumia
Pretty good outline....! Best ov luck...By the way.. I too
attempted this essay....!
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Thanks. I would like to see your outline
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Originally Posted by SamiPerhar
its a good attempt...... its make me in doubt whether i could pass the essay paper..
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O don't worry dear ! Insha Allah you will pass
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Originally Posted by andleeb Akhter
@Farah
Paper dekhty he mujy andaza tha k tum yahi essay choose kero gi..
Anyhow it's a very good outline before checking your essay line i too tried it roughly but a very good and mature attempt by you..
One thing which i wana mention here...This is a good attempt but your CSS essay line was superb dear....After reading that outline i was afraid that examiner will not give me passing marks even.... it was such a nice attempt.
Wish you all the best for CSS and for PMS too
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Thanks dear.Same to you
Asal mein topic pe depend krta hai,us mein bohat kuch tha likhnay ko, 2 dimensions theen;suffering soul and scientific age.books mein sirf books e books theen
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Originally Posted by usman khalid
Simply splendid! You have won the heart of the examiner by writing the poetic verses of Thomas Carlyle in the very beginning and then writing an urdu couplet while concluding.
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Thanks Usman.But the beginning lines were my own creation not by Thomas Carlyle
aur Urdu couplet ghalat ho gya
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Originally Posted by siddiqui88
Good attempt. Wish you the best for result.
Meray khyal se Urdu shair youn hai..." Hum nasheeni agar kitaab se ho, Is se behtar koi rafique nahi ." |
Thanks dear.Yeah,you are right.Mujh pe b ye inkeshaf ho gya tha lekin "ab pachtaway kia hovat jab chirryan chugg gayeen khait
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Originally Posted by khan Shaheer
Innovative and creative approach you've adopted, its outstanding. As it was a literary essay so in my views some literary topics are missing like it would be a good addition to include literature details of distinguished languages of the World. Anyhow, various quotes has pretty good impressions and will inspire the examiner. May ALLAH bless u with success. AMEEN.
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Thanks
Yeah I also realized later that I should give examples of Urdu and punjabi books too but at that time one can't think much.
Good Luck !