Aslam o Alikum,
And first of all "CoNgRatZ"....
..... on starting this vital thread...
All attempts are commendable and praiseworthy as after reading all attempts I got some idea of the topic because I have not opted Psychology. In my view
@Shakeel Bhai
Your "PRESENTATION STYLE" is pretty good but you didn't mention the Drawbacks of different school of thoughts didn't criticized the views of different schools.
Even then, I give you 16/20
@Sara
You too did well but made the answer much precise but overall its a very good. Suggestions given by Shehreena are very good.
Keep it I give you 15/20
@Shehreena
Well done dear. As I observed you have attempted efficiently but please make your sentence structure small and don't use too much COMMAS everywhere causeless for instance when we use and to combine two things then why you have used "COMMAS" before and (if me wrong do correct me).
Secondly, try to be British not American while answering or during your writing practice for instance you have spelled "BehaVIOR" (American) but its "BehaVIOUR" (British).
15/20 for you too dear....
@ Sara, Shakeel and Shehreena
I think while concluding you people will have to mention the concept which appeals to your mind most besides commenting formally that all schools have merits and demerits.
That's all.....
The Role of the above said TRIO --SSS-- (Sara, Shakeel and Shareena)
oh my dearest TRIO --SSS-- may ALLAH bless you all with unique success on every path of life. I've not opted Psychology even then commenting on your attempts because you people gave me your precious time and much more than what I expected so its the time to repay and I know I can't, I can't and I can't....
Keep it up INSHALLAH you people will succeed with the grace of ALLAH.
Your Well Wisher
--F@SsI--