Tuesday, October 09, 2012
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Originally Posted by farhan1111
Ok. I have a lot of respect for you sir. Definitely i would consider your suggestion seriously and may be act on it.
Sir, in 2012 css exam i have scored 33 in essay. what would be my shortcomings that i couldn't reach 40?? Any idea. Regards
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No idea
Self assessment is the best assessment.
Do you really expect me to diagnose the reason of your failure despite the fact you haven’t disclosed the topic of essay, outline and major features of your essay? Can't diagnose the reason of failure without going through your written essay.
There are multiple reasons of failure in essay ranging from wrong selection of topic to substandard ideas in a rightly selected topic.
Common blunders in essay:
1. Selecting a risky topic
2. Imbalanced essay
3. Factual blunders
4. Prejudiced, biased, and conspiracy theory loaded essay
5. Substandard language and immaturity in writing structure to the irritating level.
6. Incomplete essay without completing essential parts and without supplying reasonable conclusion.
7. Wrong direction in a right topic.
and so on
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