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Old Tuesday, November 06, 2012
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Originally Posted by sikander kalhoro View Post
1. Children's Fear Is Same As Infant's Behavior Over Various Aspects Whereas Human Being's Fear Is Victim's Brutalizing . Children's Fear Personally Revealed And Human Being's Fear Is Publicly Hidden .
2. One's Religious & Sacred View Of Death Is Free Of Groaning And Faithful . He Or She Knows Death Wont Let Him Afraid and Will Let Him Go To Another World As Paradise .
3.Books Have Said About Physically Tortured That Human Being Is Oppressed By Fussing Over The Unreal World Which Make Him/Her More Conscious About Consequences .
4. Seneca's Views Are Human Being Fears Death Much More Than Death Itself . Its A World Of Experience That He Is Taught And Learned By Surroundings .
5.The Most Indispensable Thing Which Makes Death More Repulsive Is Person's Thinking Over Negative Thoughts About Those Things Which Make Him Debilitate After Looking Such Caustic .
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Your answers seem to be a compilation of words; these are not conveying your ideas properly. It looks like you were over conscious about vocabulary giving least attention to clarity of ideas which matters more.

  • Try to stick to writer's ideas, don't give your own explanations.
  • Try to write simple, comprehensive but to the point.
  • Make sure that you communicate your thoughts as better as possible.
  • Use vocabulary according to the demand of the sentence. Don't insert it forcefully.
By these statement I don't mean to discourage you, These are just suggestions so that you may improve your writing skill. You have ability just try to hit the main string.
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