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Originally Posted by seher bano View Post
Thanks for your consideration, but could you mention the quoted examples from the original?
The words, politicians, militarists and revolutionists, all of these are a sort of repetition. If they all support overpopulation; u could mention it in one sentence. You should not reproduce anything from the original passage. Just develop your own points and write it. Besides, you used there a sentence: " the population will be double". This is a loose sentence replace it with good one.
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