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Originally Posted by seher bano
Thanks for your consideration, but could you mention the quoted examples from the original?
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The words, politicians, militarists and revolutionists, all of these are a sort of repetition. If they all support overpopulation; u could mention it in one sentence. You should not reproduce anything from the original passage. Just develop your own points and write it. Besides, you used there a sentence: " the population will be double". This is a loose sentence replace it with good one.