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Democracy in pakistan(Seniors Plz check my essay)
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Sunday, February 10, 2013
Ali Mehdi
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everyone is correct that your essay is quite informative but you could have expanded each point further more. There are many grammatical mistakes in your essay and spelling mistakes too, so you should concentrate on that side as well.
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