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Originally Posted by Abrahm Lincoln View Post
Never never never never never give up (from the CE 2013 reconducted in Faisalabad)


1. Introduction and Contention

Consistency, perseverance, patience and self-belief are the prerequisites of conquering over any problem and crisis. An individual can pull the mountains down and perform a herculian task if he or she has the courage of not giving up. However, majority of people after sustaining a bit of pressure, give up, which is a behavior for one to be highly concerned about.

2. Examples from political history
(Z.A Bhutto's signing of Simla Agreement 1972 while facing a highly hostile government in a grave post-war situation)
(Passage of 13th amendment - Emancipation Proclamation - in the United States' constitution by Abrahm Lincoln in 1863 which was highly opposed in by the congressmen)

3. Success stories from history of science
(Thomas Edison's invetion of bulb after failing 99 times)
(Aeroplane invetion by Right Brothers etc.)

4. References from human evolution history
(Some important facts from cave-dwelling to the modern age)

5. Examples from animals' behavior
(Stroy of King Bruce and Spider can be quoted)

6. Those who lack consistent behavior

7. Causes of inconsistent attitude
a. Inability to sustain pressure
b. Losing hope
c. Self disbelief
d. Misinterpreting situation

8. Attaining consistent behavior
a. Triumph over situation
b. Taking the companions' consent
c. Avoiding panic
d. Exploring the options
e. Deciding on options
f. Relaxing to overcome stress

9. Conclusion

Your essay can be said a passing attempt. However, you had to focus on never never never give up than those of examples, and histories, I mean to say in this essay you have to prove that 'Why one must not give up" this is the main thing to mention here. Apart from that you have done a commendable job. I hope you will get through. Best of Luck..

Thank you brother for your valuable comments and suggestions. Yes, you have rightly poited out, a more literary argumentation can work even better than this attempt.

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