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"Human culture comprises of two main components: an external formal component that is a reflection of an inner ideological component. Both are organically linked to a social structure and induces changes in each other. Therefore, the study of cultural problems require an understanding of social problems particularly in under-privileged countries. Mostly, these problems are a product of colonial domination and outdated social structures. Western domination inhibited the growth of culture in these societies,thus, restricting it to a certain elite class. Consequently, the culture of lower masses failed to develop despite its beauty. Inter tribal conflicts were exacerbated by imperialism which further deepened the already existing inter and intra tribal divisions. The same culture was transferred to newly independent states"
Heading: Cultural Imperialism: The emergence of social problems in colonized countries