Respected Member! The preface is too lengthy, I'll advise you a very simple method. Introduction about a page and a half: just made a short preface take start from a quotation and define what does women empowerment means, elaborate the concept of women empowerment. Then go after the different schools of thought that how they approach the problem of women empowerment (Liberal school of thought, Legal school of thought, Islamic school of thouth et al.). Explain the plus points of women empowerment for the country and the society in different spheres of life i.e. Political, economic etc and the prevalent prejudices they have been facing. Then narrate the history of the efforts for women empowerment in Pakistan, criticise those efforts, make suggestions of your own, give arguments in support of your suggestions. At the end, wind up your essay with an optimistic note. Always remember that you should not ignore the starking negative points prevalent in our society against women but you should not go to the extreme, always present yourself as a balance not emotional personality with an optimistic approach towards things. Good luck!

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