Lack of sequence.
Right as a mother,wife,sister and daughter etc instead you write separately 4 character of woman in 4 headings in outlines to arrange them in one line and form a new modified adject ive word which define all character.
Like this:
women play four dimensions of character in life:
thats only my personal opinion just create something new in outline and find new words.regards
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Few words are best.
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