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Old Monday, March 31, 2014
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My title was :

"Instrumentalizing moral-sensitive intelligence for societal welfare : A challenge for Educational Agencies "

kindly comment .......

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Originally Posted by nisma khan View Post
education without maorality is casuality
sounds funny to me
Well you endeavored a bit,hope your precise-content went gud....
i am confused at the lengthy topic of my precise:


My title was :

"Instrumentalizing moral-sensitive intelligence for societal welfare : A challenge for Educational Agencies "

kindly comment .......

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Originally Posted by Guria SNT View Post
here is my precis please check it and comment
precis; Education and morality
The contemporary man should discover use of intelligence for service of love and kindness. The human training should include empathic capacity development. By this way social morality and chances of survival can increase. It is challenge for educators and educational institutions to train morally. Traditionally religion was custodian of social morality. But their failure resulted in God is dead theological rheoteric. The powerful men believe machiavellianism in their decision; power is morality, morality is power which increases the chance of nuclear devastation. We hope educators have capacity, commitment and time to instill morality in human intelligence. Ways must be found in human training to give assurance to love, security to be kind and integrity for functional empathy
Well the first three to four sentences were very apt and brilliantly laid out....However,starting from the traditional role of religion to the nuclear devastation and then including hope are things that are just average and kind of exact copied out things,without any deliberate editing or conveying the essence........But hope,the examiner gets impressed by your first few lines!!

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Originally Posted by abbas khan 119 View Post
Utility of intelligence and human survival.
Well very commendable title,i must say.......you just hit the bulls' eye........simple,short and comprehensive !! Best of luck
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