Ahhh..When i read your outline, I had made up my mind to reply and point out few flaws (flaws=flaws in my view point ), but by the time i read the first few lines of umarabbas, i could see that my points were printed in his reply.

All is well written except the inclusion of Islam and Pakistan -- Still if you want, you can put Pakistan somewhere in the end but not in the initial or middle section unless you compare women empowerment in different countries.You can trick the examiner by introducing ISALM in a stealthy way and that is, if you write something about women empowerment since the start of life on earth.. but you have to pay a price here if you dont know about that.

Your outline goes well for the essays pointed out by Umarabbas and i would add one more ..Women Empowerment in Pakistan on the principles of Islam

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