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Title: The Rise of Middle Class

In Early times, people of middle class were totally alienated from the rest of culture. They were not considered as the part of society except few who were in the professions such as Army and those who had strong family background. They were not allowed to mingle with other elites of their town but these people with the high self esteem made their own civilization and started giving due respect to everyone. With this, they came across several positive changes in their people. They valued their beliefs of goodness and created a mark for others to follow. They prohibited disgraceful behavior and preferred simplicity in life.