[QUOTE=Muhmmad Ali Raza;729186]As for as points like achievements and spodts facilities are concerned;you are right didnt make the essay theme but the word new somehow relates to this arguementatation. If we see the statistics of pakistani women achievements and represntation in variety of sports then it hardly beats anyother country. In olympics and other world games excet 2-3 our women represntation is less as compared to australia and even india in south asia. And even in these sports they dont have any noteworthy acknowledgement and achuevments. The purpose of ambassador can be more efficiently served if we are winning titles like sania mirza in tennis and a girl i dont remember exactly her name in badminton from india who have brought world wide recognition to her country. I think india's society is not better than ours where rapes ratio is much more than pakistan and gender inequality and women rights denial is more there.. But
globally they are considered liberal and modern and progressive than pakistan. So if we better equip our women with sports facilities then it may help in promoting the cause of ambassador of soft image.[/QUOTE
But dear this is what i think, examiner may not agree with me and may consider my essay irrelevant..but your is a good and straight forward essay that totally relates the topic. Wish you good luck.
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