Well thats what i am bothered about.I used all those superfluous words necessary to potray our sportswomen as best ambassadors due to soft nature of females.You are right to comprehend that if we do not mention achievements etc it hardly covers 8-9 pages,but i didnt included this idea even then i was able to write 16 pages.
Considering the nature of the topic i would be in doldrums till the result later this year.
I wish and pray for your success.
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