[COLOR="Green"]Dear writer,
You know very well about your topic and you do have facts and figures but in your whole writing there are several places where grammatical errors can be seen.
So work on sentence structure and tenses.
Anyhow, your essay is well equipped with information.
some error are:
1- "He appointed Chief Justice in Muradabad" (He was appointed)
2- His belief that armed uprising against the British was pointless him unpopular with some Muslims, but it did not stop him working towards reconciliation between British and the Muslim community after the war. (made him unpopular, he did not stop his working/efforts)
etc...!