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1: The War on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights

2: Anticipation is often greater than realization

3: Punctuality is virtue of bored

4: The introduction of new digital technologies has radically altered identities

5: In a hierarchy every employee tends to rise to is level of incompetence

6: I disapprove what you say, but I defend to death your right to say

7: Luxury predecessors becomes the necessity of successors

8: When life throws you lemons , make lemonade

9: Govt Should eliminate subsidies and incentives for manufacturers and consumers of electric cars as they are costly and do not do enough to protect environment

10: Labor saving devices are more troublesome than they worth



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Introduction
9/11 and us invasion in afganistan
Present position
Us failure
Is war on terror limited to Afghanistan?
War on terror in iraq Syria Middle East
ISIS

this has nothing to do with topic. why this?
Human Rights violation

American violation of Humanitarian Laws
Attrocities in Afghanistan
Poverty
Inequalities
Food shortage
Refuge Camps
Internal Displacement
Killings of Innocents
peshawar Incident
Killings of Children
Intolerance
Sectarian Killings
Shikarpur Incident

can they be termed human rights violations??

No freedom of Expression
Media under threat
Child Abuse
Women victimizations
Minorities Under threat
Hurdles in admistration of Justice
Bad Governace
Hurdles in implementation of law

again, can they be termed human rights violations caused by war on terror??

Remedies:

21 Amendment
Military Courts (really? aint they creating another problem by not giving a fair trial?)
Zarb E Azab
Banned On Capital punishments uplifted

Conclusion

In my view most of this was irrelevent. it seems like you had tried to reach the word limit and have not understood what the topic demanded.




Introduction
sep 9/11 attack on U.S
U.S INVASION OF AFGHANISTAN
U.S INVASION OF IRAQ

HUMAN RIGHTS.
Freedom of conscience
Freedom of thought
Freedom of expression in a sense that consoles collective liberty
freedom of movement
freedom of beliefs

How war on terror has has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights

Missing persons
stern laws (Protection of Pakistan Ordinance,PATRIOT Act,LAWS ENACTED BY ARAB COUNTRIES)
bar on freedom of expression (ARAB STATES)
bar on freedom of movement
Indiscriminate killings (drones, military operations)



BUT

Terrorism is itself an excess so, its eradicating measures will also be excessive

CONCLUSION.

Last edited by Codename Hijazi; Saturday, July 04, 2015 at 12:48 PM.
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