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Originally Posted by motivated View Post
Please do evaluate my essay

in a hierarchy every employee tends to rise to his level of incompetency

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Please s seniors check my outline. Criticism will be highly appreciated.

A. Introduction
B. What motivates man to raise himself in a hierarchy system
1: Economic rise
2: Social respect
3: Dream to lead.
4: To avoid the orders of higher level management.
5: To fulfill basic needs of life( discussed motivation theory of maslow)
C: What means he adapts that raises his level of incompetence.
again I gave 6 points here but don't remember exactly
1: Misses his natural capabilities
2: Get involved in unnecessary arguments
3: Rise in jealousy factor.
4: Tries to find short cuts.
D: Hierarchy system can be beneficial for org if few steps are taken
gave here few suggestions to make the system effective.
E. Conclusion.
The main concern of this essay is about finding the shortcomings in Hierarchy system and suggesting recommendations and improvements. A number of examples could be quoted from various robust hierarchies like that of Army and other progressive public and private institutions, but when it comes to essay nothing is ever enough. The scheme and approach of your essay seems quite auspicious. You should remain hopeful.
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