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Default Seniors Please check my first short Essay and point out grammatical mistakes.

Seniors Please check my short essay as its my first essay so i want to know my grammatical mistakes. So please point out mistakes and leave your helpful suggestions.
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BOOKS

In the ancient time people had just one source of knowledge, books. They were used to read books for enhancing their knowledge: for learning their concern books; schools, colleges, and universities. Besides this many other books, stories, general knowledge, poetry, etc, were also used to read by them. It was consider a good friend to human and if a man were not able to a purchase book or he wanted to read different writers different books then he used to go library. This was a place of knowledge with quit calmness and complete study environment. But now people have forgotten this trend and they are going away from books. They just read their academic books and don’t take interest in other knowledge exploring books, which were written by prominent writers. Our libraries are also showing the scene of horror house, hardly a person or two shows to us there.
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There was neither electronic media nor any other source of information in the old ages. People had only one source of information and that was book. They were used to read their academic as well as other informational books. In that era there was no other source of information for them. So people were dependent on books. As now we have different source of information like books, television, social media, newspaper and many others. So books are ignorant to us. We often use internet for getting information and it’s informative also but we should not just depend on internet because every things have pros and cons so there are many stuff on internet but it jumble the students. Besides this a lot of mistakes are scene to us during search and even we don’t know whether the written materials are authentic or not.
Books were and are still very expensive, people were unable to purchase books and they were used to go to the libraries. Now they just purchase academic books, neither they purchase other books nor do they go to the libraries, its wastage of money as well as time in their thoughts. But they are unaware of the stuffs of books which have been written by a great scholar, after great hectic researches on topics, with concrete and authentic materials, and they just depend on other cheap sources, unauthentic materials with a number of mistakes and blunders. So books are expensive but it’s desirable and perfects source of knowledge with concrete materials. If students are unable to purchase these books then they can go to the libraries which are built for them.
Each and every type of book is now easily available in the market, even at our door step. We can buy it easily at any time but it wasn’t possible before this, books were just available in the cities big shops and books don’t have easily access to these books and that’s why they preferred libraries but now there is no hurdle to us in purchasing any book.
Great thinkers of the world had and have used to read books, they have their own world of books and they treat books like a friend and their hobby is just reading books. Reading books is always suggested by them. They always read books and spend most of their time into the libraries. They have in many books suggested to read books and make it your habit. But now a day most of the students are not habitual to reading, they think it’s boring habit.
Books gives us different type of knowledge , there are a lot of books available to in the markets, general knowledge, dictionaries, world affairs, current affairs, competitive exams books, science books, poetry books, sports books, Islamic books, stories books, and children’s books are easily available anywhere at any time. It’s up to the aptitude and taste of the student.
One of the advantages of book is that it is easily moveable to anywhere. So if student want to study into the park than he can easily bring book with him. Beside this student can also bring it with himself to his village or any other part or on any occasion. So it’s a good friend of man in travelling also, he can read it with pleasure during his travel.
Books have a long life and it is also durable as not easily perishing because of its heard material. Student often share the books after reading it or accomplishing their purpose from it. So it has a long life as it is transferable from one student or person to another. Often students give their useless books to their friends, relatives or sale it to the old book shops, these books are again purchase by someone. So one book can flourishes the mind of many students by spreading its illuminating knowledge.
Books are completely secure for the generations as they have moral data and don’t have any picture or such things on it. If we compare it with internet books or any other source of information, it’s the safest source of all. Today’s internet is full of vulgar material and is becoming the cause of the spoilage generation. It’s such a vulgar if we want to browse on an Islamic page for books; we have a lot of obscene pictures on those sites. So books are the safest source of information.

Everything has advantages and disadvantages, but many thinkers agreed that books are most beneficent. So let us have a look over disadvantages of books in our daily life.
Books are good, having beneficial and concrete material, I agree, but it occupies a broad space in our houses and don’t left space for any other things in our shelf. Students often Willy nilly give their books to their friends because of not having space into their houses. So that’s one of the disadvantages.
Time consuming is one of the weak points of books. It takes too much time too search a topic as compared to internet or mobile apps. For example if you want to search a word in a dictionary it will take more time as compare to mobile dictionary. Beside this it takes more time to search a topic into book as compared to internet. So it’s time eating too.
Some students or readers think that it’s boring too. Whenever students start reading they get bore and lacking interest, even though it’s saying if you don’t have a sleep then start reading books, well very soon feel sleepy. So it’s boring and that’s one of the reason that student often refer other things.
Now day’s students every day want to search something new, and if they want to learn a single topic for it they have to purchase a whole book. That’s why people don’t buy a whole book for a single topic and they search it through internet within minutes.
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