I have just gone through the expansion in a hurry. Please make sure you take a look at the corrections or additions made in the commas. Please make sure you learn to use the comma, full stop, semi colon and colon. Moreover, resort to the basic yet suitable English for expansion. Your first sentence should be giving the audience an idea as to what is the main stance of expansion and the rest of expansion should be derived from it.


Man is superior to all other creatures, because it (he) strives to attain (explore) the truth and never compromises against the odds. It (He) explored the nature and glorified the complex phenomenon of universe. At every step there were new challenges-much tougher and more exhausting then (the) previous one (ones) ,but it (he) continued and hence (consequently) it (he) diluted the impacts of natural catastrophe, made it possible to see the life at sub cellular level, filtered the ocean and dramatized the reality that man can challenge superstition and that due (to) its (these) extraordinary cognitive abilities, angels were ordered to prostrate (before him).

Consider the life of Holy prophet(pbuh),who lead (led) a miserable life in Shaib I abi Talib, but (and) never compromised on the basic principles of truth and equality; it was due to his dedicated effort (efforts) that transformed Arab into a civilized nation (that Arab was being transformed into a civilized nation), (the same Arabs) who were once (conventionally) labelled as illiterate- (.)Than (then) again it was Arab who (which) also produced Umar(ra)the farooq(just)Abu bakkar siddique(the truth teller).

Unfold the history further ,there comes great nations: industrial revolution, mass production and age of enlightenment. It is another name of product manufactured out of trial and tribulation (this sentence does not have any context here). It's glorified at the behest of sacrifices and struggle made by common people.Scientists sacrificed their lives,middle men crucified by nobles man (men) and poor farmer (farmers) were (made) devoid of (their) land,but it was (the) french revolution and its great impetus that introduced the universal principle of democracy, equality and justice in Europe.

But in our country(,) situation (the scenario) is very different, (.)we have accepted that we are succumbers, as we want to live in sulf (self) perpetuated cycle of myseries (miseries)and disappointment (s) and we've never tempted least to make a trial, to initiate an effort and to get rid of such bitter scolding then look into the eyes of adversary- (.)its (It is )time for her (her??) to surrender,since presence of silver lining among the dark clouds is quite possible.If dart of disappointment is there ,then why not join hand in hand and through (by utilizing) cohesive forces of universal brotherhood, respect and love transform the country into an eternal paradise.

If you can't fly,then run. If you can't run, then walk.if you can’t walk,then crawl.But whatever you do, you have to keep moving farward.-Martin Luther King jr

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