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Originally Posted by rixvi5 View Post
kindly evaluate my essay outline and suggestions are more than welcome
OUTLINE
1) Introduction:
The act of Forgiveness is a virtue par excellence as it is natural to commit a mistake but to condone over such a mistake is an ethereal trait.

2) Why do human beings tend to commit an error?
a) Human being is not a perfect creature
b) At times human actions are driven by whims, desires and passions
c) the vicissitudes of life are not entirely in control of humans
d) Conflict of thoughts can lead to probable error

3) Why it is hard to forgive?
a) Humans do not forget easily the harm done to themselves
b) They believe in eye for an eye principle
c) Driven by selfishness to secure self interest

4) What benefits do the act of forgiveness yield?
a) It leads to the inner peace since it is a larger than life philosophy
b) It begets Tolerance (eye for an eye would make whole world blind)
c) Promotion of diversity based on compassion and emphatic feelings
d) It leads to the idea of reforming

5) To what extent Forgiveness should be permissible ?
: The Life of Prophet Mohammad (P.B.U.H) is the ideal to measure the virtue of forgiveness.

6) Conclusion
Your outline is not clear.there is coherence but not proper
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