Thread: Women Empowerment would empower Pakistan - Kindly check outline
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Old Thursday, January 19, 2017
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Originally Posted by Ahmad Abbas View Post
Introduction can be fine tuned a bit. Why are you going with three paragraphs in Intro? A 2500 words research report normally have only one paragraph for intro.

Important of all: Try to answer the essay question in Introduction. The para could be 10 or 12 sentences long.
The first paragraph is Intro. The 2nd paragraph relates to the 2nd point of my outline which is the current situation of women in pakistan and its impact. and the 3rd paragraph explains the 3rd point of my outline which shows the interplay of women empowerment and prosperity of Pakistan.

Are 3, 4 lines enough to explain any point of the outline ? Kindly comment.
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