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Old Thursday, January 19, 2017
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Brother please omit the information in 2nd and 3rd paragraph and discuss these things in 'Analytical Framework', these could be discussed as it is in main body of the essay under relevant section.

In intro always answer the question that in your essay is, 'Women empowerment can empower Pakistan'. So, any editor would like to see how it actually can empower Pakistan. Then rest of Info is for analysis, criticism, your opinion, some facts, solutions by important persons on the subject
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