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Originally Posted by sheikh87
The first paragraph is Intro. The 2nd paragraph relates to the 2nd point of my outline which is the current situation of women in pakistan and its impact. and the 3rd paragraph explains the 3rd point of my outline which shows the interplay of women empowerment and prosperity of Pakistan.
Are 3, 4 lines enough to explain any point of the outline ? Kindly comment.
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It depends upon your outline. If it's extensive then yes three to four lines are enough. If shorter one then a paragraph should be dedicated.
Further, when you say 1500 dies every year, try to qualify that. Who says that? Was it in a book, a report or some government ministry? Such information should always be referenced