i wrote approximately 1000 word essay with bad conclusion and got 40 marks ... how ?? ... was essay result generally good ??



my outline

introduction ,
history of violence ,
habeel and kaabeel ,
agricultural revolution in fertile crescent ,
why incompetent may use violence ,
need for survival ,
violence is an easy way ,
any one can use it in any form against any one .
current scenario ,
violence used by incompetent political parties ,
violence used by incompetent youth ,
religious organisations ,
use of violence by USA in the form of drones ,
suggestions ,
conclusion

yes,this time FPSC passed a lot of candidates in essay even without checking their papers properly.

the beacon example of essay result of Karachi re exam is in front of us

so there is nothing shocking here

it is latest standard of FPSC for lessening their burden.

I have also attempted this Essay and i was not happy with the way it went but i passed it with 42. My thesis statement revolve around the fact that violence is becoming an international problem because it yield an identity and safety for an incompetent person so he started to pursue and promote it to others. Hence need of the hour is to eradicate the psyche behind the violence
Violence is the last refuge for incompetent
Introduction
Violence
Types of violence
radicalism
terrorism
extremism
Who is an incompetent person
Conflict resolution distinguish competent and incompetent person
Why Violence is last refuge for incompetent person
Psychological reason
Social reason
Marxist point of view
Journey of Violence in the World
Habeel Qabeel accident
Wars at different times in history
Current Scenario
USA new world order game
Violence In Pakistan
Domestic violence
Violence at women
Sectarian Violence
Terrorism
Affects of this incompetent approach
peace fabric is destroyed in world
economic issue
degradation of moral values etc.
Remedies to eradicate Violence
Education for all
Psychological awareness; Violence is a weapon of incompetent person not competent
Internationally collaborated efforts should be carried out
I have forgotten remaining remedies
Conclusion

Strange


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exactly and that is why the joy of clearing essay is ruined. WE'll have to work much harder for next attempt because generosity may not last longer.

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