about Middle East and Pakistan role in reducing tension between Saudi and Iran
 

Q; what are the new developments in middle east regarding Sauidi and Iran?
what role Pakistan Can play to reduce tension between them?

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[QUOTE=farooqkhan345;1030934]Q; what are the new developments in middle east regarding Sauidi and Iran?
what role Pakistan Can play to reduce tension between them?

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