English Correction Prep for CE-2018

[Greenboat]

Hi,

Since the composition has been a hard nut to crack. It needs a home work practice. Without enough practice, I feel no candidate can really attain auspicious marks. So let us to crack corrections from past papers.

Best of luck

[Greenboat]

Q.(a) Correct the following: (CSS-2017)

(i) In the accident one of my arms was broken and my legs bruised.

(ii) The people who had been raising slogans against the government for many hours they wanted increase in their salaries.

(iii) You have been working very hard for the last two years Isn't it?

(iv) John could hardly do not better than to have caught a bass of such dimension.

(v) I who have no chance to meet him would rather go with you instead of sitting at home

(vi) He not only comes there for swimming but also for coaching new swimmers.

(vii) When he visited the fair last time, he bought not less than twenty school bags.

[S R Bhutto]

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Translation:

In the lives of nations, unity is the only power with which they are able to overcome difficulties and achieve success. National unity plays an important role in the prosperity of a country. National unity is of utmost significance in strengthening our nation. Undoubtedly, Pakistan is going through the most sensitive phase in its history. In order to make Pakistan a powerful and welfare state, incorporating national unity in its folds is an essential endeavour. The need for resolving mutual disputes and building unity was never as essential as it is now. Our Western and Eastern borders are demanding our attention. To examine issues of establishing an environment of peace, bringing economic stability, tackling energy crisis, we have to, individually and collectively, display tolerance and patience and work hard towards it

Guys, check how is this ? Pls point out mistake. TIA

[De Despot]

(i) In the accident(,) one of my arms was broken and my legs (were) bruised.

(ii) The people who had been raising slogans against the government for many hours they wanted (an) increase in their salaries.

(iii) You have been working very hard for the last two years(,) Isn't it?

(iv) John could hardly do not better than to have caught a bass of such dimension.

(v) I who have (has) no chance to meet him would rather go with you instead of sitting at home

(vi) He not only comes there (here not only) for swimming but also for coaching (the) new swimmers.

(vii) When he visited the fair last time, he bought not (no) less than twenty school bags.

Underlined to be removed and words within parenthesis to be added. ( I am not assured about the correction, though).

[infinite optimism]

1)In the accident,my arm broke and legs bruised.

2)People who were raising slogans against government for many hours wanted to increase their salaries.

3)You have been working very hard for the last two years,haven't you?

4)John could hardly do better than to catch a bass of such dimension.

5)Because i have no chance to meet him,i would rather go with you than sit at home.

6)He not only came to swim there,but also to teach new swimmers.

7)When he visited the fair last time,he bought no less than twenty school bags.

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