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DESPITE the grandstanding from officialdom, anti-extremism is little more than a buzzword in Pakistan. For while everyone acknowledges the importance of countering extremism, no one in authority appears willing to actually undertake the task — at least not in a coherent and consistent manner. Let alone a strategy, even the fundamental question of jurisdiction remains unresolved. On Tuesday, the National Assembly Standing Committee on Defence referred a bill proposing anti-extremism measures to the Cabinet Secretariat to decide whether it fell within the domain of the defence ministry or that of the interior. The bill, introduced by a PML-N legislator, suggests that a body be set up specifically to identify the factors likely to give rise to violent extremism, identify those most at risk of being influenced by radicalisation, and formulate policies targeted at the youth to raise awareness of the perils that extremism poses to the country.

That we are still fumbling at the starting line of what should have by now been a sustained campaign is not only dispiriting but downright alarming. Religious extremism has been percolating through this society since decades, becoming increasingly blatant over time. At best, it has divided society along the lines of faith; at worst, it has been the impetus for committing murder in the name of God. Acts of terrible violence — targeted killings, lynchings and bombings, etc — have claimed tens of thousands of lives. It was not until the massacre of more than 130 children in Peshawar in December 2014 that the state came up with a plan to tackle terrorism. However, without being supplemented by a holistic strategy — the much-vaunted ‘counter-narrative’ — to weed out bigotry and intolerance from society, the 20-point National Action Plan was a laundry list at best. Even that has not been properly implemented. For instance, Nacta — the organisation responsible for crafting a counterterrorism policy — has not been strengthened as stipulated; it remains a moribund entity. For all intents and purposes, NAP is now little more than a reminder of a brief period when there was collective political resolve to push back against violent extremism.

Instead, perversely enough, the state has muzzled voices of reason, ‘disappeared’ individuals with views critical of the establishment, and demonised those professing ‘secular’ opinions. In other words, progressive ideas that should have been allowed space have been further marginalised. It is hardly surprising that despite the success of the military operations against terrorist groups, almost every day continues to bring forth evidence that Pakistan’s slide towards obscurantism continues unchecked. Violent extremism is no longer the preserve of the poor and uneducated segment of society: as recent examples show, even university-educated youth are becoming agents of terror. With the growing disquiet in the global community over Pakistan’s militancy problem, the country’s standing in the world is compromised — and no amount of bombast can change that.
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Anti-extremism is no more than slang in Pakistan. State is unwilling to take counter-extremism seriously. Like, question of jurisdiction is still unresolved. On Tuesday PMLN legislator introduced a bill in National Assembly Standing Committee on Defense, which argues about extremism related jurisdictions are either on Defense or Interior ministry. Bill also suggests formulating a body that identifies the rise of extremism, related risk and how to tackle this menace. Bill shows that we are still none the wiser.
Religious extremism asunder the society and claimed thousands of lives through deliberate acts of violence. After APS attack, state formed National action plan to tackle extremism from society, but its implementations are apathetic. Due to marginalization of ideas state remains unable to formulate a coherent and consensus based ideology against extremism. Therefore, Extremism is on the rise not only in uneducated and poor society but also in educated youth. Poor anti-extremism efforts are fading the achievements of military operation and also tarnishing Pakistan image globally.
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Dawn Editorial.
DESPITE the grandstanding from officialdom, anti-extremism is little more than a buzzword in Pakistan. For while everyone acknowledges the importance of countering extremism, no one in authority appears willing to actually undertake the task — at least not in a coherent and consistent manner. Let alone a strategy, even the fundamental question of jurisdiction remains unresolved. On Tuesday, the National Assembly Standing Committee on Defence referred a bill proposing anti-extremism measures to the Cabinet Secretariat to decide whether it fell within the domain of the defence ministry or that of the interior. The bill, introduced by a PML-N legislator, suggests that a body be set up specifically to identify the factors likely to give rise to violent extremism, identify those most at risk of being influenced by radicalisation, and formulate policies targeted at the youth to raise awareness of the perils that extremism poses to the country.
That we are still fumbling at the starting line of what should have by now been a sustained campaign is not only dispiriting but downright alarming. Religious extremism has been percolating through this society since decades, becoming increasingly blatant over time. At best, it has divided society along the lines of faith; at worst, it has been the impetus for committing murder in the name of God. Acts of terrible violence — targeted killings, lynchings and bombings, etc — have claimed tens of thousands of lives. It was not until the massacre of more than 130 children in Peshawar in December 2014 that the state came up with a plan to tackle terrorism. However, without being supplemented by a holistic strategy — the much-vaunted ‘counter-narrative’ — to weed out bigotry and intolerance from society, the 20-point National Action Plan was a laundry list at best. Even that has not been properly implemented. For instance, Nacta — the organisation responsible for crafting a counterterrorism policy — has not been strengthened as stipulated; it remains a moribund entity. For all intents and purposes, NAP is now little more than a reminder of a brief period when there was collective political resolve to push back against violent extremism.

Instead, perversely enough, the state has muzzled voices of reason, ‘disappeared’ individuals with views critical of the establishment, and demonised those professing ‘secular’ opinions. In other words, progressive ideas that should have been allowed space have been further marginalised. It is hardly surprising that despite the success of the military operations against terrorist groups, almost every day continues to bring forth evidence that Pakistan’s slide towards obscurantism continues unchecked. Violent extremism is no longer the preserve of the poor and uneducated segment of society: as recent examples show, even university-educated youth are becoming agents of terror. With the growing disquiet in the global community over Pakistan’s militancy problem, the country’s standing in the world is compromised — and no amount of bombast can change that.
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Anti-extremism is no more than slang in Pakistan. State is unwilling to take counter-extremism seriously. Like, question of jurisdiction is still unresolved. On Tuesday PMLN legislator introduced a bill in National Assembly Standing Committee on Defense, which argues about extremism related jurisdictions are either on Defense or Interior ministry. Bill also suggests formulating a body that identifies the rise of extremism, related risk and how to tackle this menace. Bill shows that we are still none the wiser.
Religious extremism asunder the society and claimed thousands of lives through deliberate acts of violence. After APS attack, state formed National action plan to tackle extremism from society, but its implementations are apathetic. Due to marginalization of ideas state remains unable to formulate a coherent and consensus based ideology against extremism. Therefore, Extremism is on the rise not only in uneducated and poor society but also in educated youth. Poor anti-extremism efforts are fading the achievements of military operation and also tarnishing Pakistan image globally.
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Brother, first work on your grammar and expression. Always use third person in précis.
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Thanks for your reply brother.Can you mention some critical mistakes (except third person I forget probably).
And please suggest some tips to improve expression.
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Thanks for your reply brother.Can you mention some critical mistakes (except third person I forget probably).
And please suggest some tips to improve expression.
Thanks in anticipation.
1. The State is unwilling to take counter-extremism measuers seriously.

2. On Tuesday, PMLN legislator introduced a bill in National Assembly Standing Committee on Defense which, argues that extremism related jurisdictions come under the Defense or Interior ministry.

3. After APS attack, state formed National action plan to uproot extremism from society, but its implementation is apathetic.*

To improve grammar, you can consult any good book on grammar. Once your grammar is strong, you will not need people like me to point your mistakes; you will do it yourself. Keep on practicing. Review your work and rewrite again.
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