i m really thanking of you and quratullain for given me time ....and i have been happy for using the word amendment inshallah i shall improve my english day by day,thankx again for copration

last night when i was go to shop for buying cigrates ,then my friend came there and he told me sit at hotel ,when we were siting at hotel then i asked to him mister where are you since morning then he hadbeen told me i was very busying today,basically a new net connection i seted today and have been alot of probleming in client pc ,then i told him mister come into the point and dont waste your time do study very hardly and success your future.
after 15 minuts meeting he told me what is your mood can u come with me for outing ,and also we gone to friend ,he told hows ur prepration going for css u dont giv us time then i was telling him mister from morning to evening i dnt have time but after 8 pm to till 12 am ma be i give u time where ever u gone then i should be with you.

please check it out and inform me that how many mistakes have in my composition

Good attempt Waqar!

It's really far better than your previous posts!

But it still contains some errors which I'm going to rectify, please read the corrections carefully.


RED: Structural Mistake

GREEN: Punctuation, spelling or disorder of words

BLUE: No need of that particular word


Here goes the correction:


i was go I was going
for buying to buy
told me sit asked me to sit
when we were siting at hotel i asked to him while being there at hotel I asked him
where are you where have you been
then he hadbeen told me i was very busying today, he then told me that he's been busy all the day
basically a new net connection i seted today and have been alot of probleming in client pc ,
He basically installed a new internet connection, whith which clients have encountered some problem
then i told him mister come into the point and dont waste your time do study very hardly I advised him not to waste time and work hard at studies.
he told me what is your mood can u come with me for outing ,and also we gone to friend
He inquired, if my mood is ok and we can have an outing
told hows ur prepration
asked how's my preparation
u dont giv us time then i was telling him mister from morning to evening i dnt have time but after 8 pm to till 12 am ma be i give u time where ever u gone then i should be with you.
He complained that I don't give him time and I explained my study schedules and ensured him that I'll be available between 8 p.m. and 12 a.m.

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@ Waqar

Explore the following thread :

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...beginners.html

I commence above thread especially for you. Please pay close heed on Grammar classes.

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history of abro family

bahraam khan abro has the landlorded man of our family ,and he was an also chief operating man of abro family.

bahraam khan abro has two soned 1st(*shah muhammad abro) and 2nd (*ameer bux abro) and also has one daughtered
(shahbibi) ,shahbibi wifed of (khaan bahadur) and also khaan bahadur was the first father-in-law of
(zulfiqar ali bhutto) (sheereen bhutto) the 1st wifed of zulfiqar ali bhutto and sheereen bhutto was the duaghter
of khaan bahadur.

*shah muhammad abro was the chairmain of the city larkana,and *ameer bux abro was the daaroga in water department
*shah muhammad abro has two soned (+ameer bux abro) and (anwar abro),and *ameer bux abro
has also two soned (ali nawaz abro) and (aalam abro)

+ameer bux abro was the (SDO)in arrigation department and he is also the son of *shah muhammad ,and anwar was doing landlording and he is also the son of *shah muhammad

ali nawaz abro have owned hatel in naudero city,and aalam abro gaved shop at the rent.

+ameer bux abro have 4 soned (Rahim bux abro),(Aftab abro),(+shah muhammad abro),(Abdul ghaffor abro)

ali nawaz abro have 4 soned (munawar abro),(muharram abro),(ayaz abro) and he is also the son of *ameer bux abro.
Aalam abro have 3 soned (Mushtaque abro),(ghulaam murtaza),(saleem abro)

Rahim bux abro have 3 soned (Abdul sattar abro),(WAQAR ABRO the cssforum member),(Adil abro)
Rahim bux abro was the General Manager of pakistan steel mill and he is also father of WAQAR ABRO ,and rahim bux abro
is the son of +ameer bux abro.

aftab abro have 3 soned (sikandar ali abro),(Nomi abro),(Adeel abro) and he is doing now days the business of civil construction
AFTab abro is also the son of +ameer bux abro.

+shah muhammad abro have 3 soned (shaheen abro),(shehroz abro),(yasir abro) and he is doing job SSGC as a
executive officer and he is also the son of +ameer bux abro.

Abdul ghafoor abro have 3 soned (abdulla abro),(hasibullah abro),(abdul rehman abro) and he is also doing business of
transport ,he is also the sonof +ameer bux abro.

Abdul sattar abro is doing job in faysal bank as a assistant vise president and he is also the son of the rahim bux abro
sattar is also the brother of waqar abro the cssforum member.

sikandar ali abro is the first (CSP) officer in abro family he passed his first attemt in 2005 and also in 2006 his roll number was 232 2911 SIKANDAR ALI SINDH (RURAL)
he is doing
job in AG sindh,(he gotted accounts group) he is also the son the aftab abro.

* = the man who died
+ = after the death of his, the name puted at him

to be continued

i m sending m family history to you with own composition please check it out
and correct the gramatically mistakes.

Firstly it`s not a paragraph. It intend to be Pointwise figures. Try to avoid amphorous structures.

Bahraam khan abro was a landlord (Landlord is itself a noun, It doesn`t need any supportive adjective. While has reveal Present perfect which advocate past action & present evident. Thus Past Simple is exact form for it).

He was also head of the family (An article is never followed by additional words).




He had two sons, Shah mohammad abro and Ameer bux abro, and only daughter. (Noun never repeats simualtaneously rather changes with Pronoun. Son is a noun, So verb forms never apply over the noun).


I gotta go, I`ll answer the rest portion as soon as possible. Moreover, Try to discriminate Nouns, Verbs and Adjectives.

Chao,

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i have done dicuss at current topics,i m telling to qurat and suresh and other moderators please check how much i improve my self,i have been doing discuss everyday since last week please check and inform me

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@ Waqar

I murdered a lady because she used me (no need of separater)

If she used to love me then I never kill her.

(First you use did and loved together. It is rule of Grammar (past indefinite tense) after using did, you never suppose to use past participle. Besides, you sentence were lacking emotions. If and May be always use for prediction. No need to exploit both together. )

i dont killed her : Under the grammatical rule (Present indefinite) we use V1 form only.

I mentioned a link above. Please go through it.

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My question is that : (No need, just come to the point directly)


Is that mean : Does it mean ?


We are bearing a burning issues regarding democracy in Pakistan.

an one issue : "An" itself discribe singular form then no need to annex one. Read "Article" rules.

our muslims killed & We did not make : Our Muslims are being killed but we could not make apposite efforts against issue.

(Firstly, Use "Passive voice" when you try to describe Object. Forms of ability are rather good then appending did )

Besides, Kashmir Issue could n`t meet to its end. While Military operations in Waziristan have become another threat for Muslim nation.

Waqar, You`re not paying heed to Grammar. Devoid of it, You wouldn`t be able to enhance your English.

Chao,

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The credit goes to Osama-Bin-ladin and his supportive parties such as Al-Qaeda, Lashkar-e-taiba so on. We must protest against bush for accusing all muslims.

In the light of Holy Qur`an, Jihad is to fight for the sake of Islam. Whereas, They fight for their own interest.

or: The word or implies the condition

we have wont : wont is short form of will not. You can`t use two auxiliary verbs together , have and will.

Debate & with him: Debate sounds awkward in this matter. We are not with him but against his apocryphal arguments.

some buddy : Right word is somebody. Buddy itself a separate word. While somebody was not appropriate for sentence. It should be replaced with anybody.

such like : They both are different terms using to example an specific thing. you can either use like or such as. Such as sounds better above.

Try to read Grammar book and Articles publish in Dawn.

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