moderators check it out
 

i m telling to that all cssforum members,specially quratullain & sureshlasi & also last island ,all moderators

please check it out my all thread, me sended to forum ,and how much me improve my prepration for css ?

[QUOTE=waqarabro]i m telling to that all cssforum members,specially quratullain & sureshlasi & also last island ,all moderators

please check it out my all thread, me sended to forum ,and how much me improve my prepration for css ?[/QUOTE]

Dear Waqar,

I just had a glimpse of your recent posts and found that most of them fall under "News & Articles Section" and are copied/pasted somewhere lacking reference as well. Coming to your request, honestly I can't evaluate your performance on the basis of your posts found under News & Articles Section. The only way for me to evaluate your effort is those posts whereby you've requested something or those where you've given your own opinion like the first post of this thread. And here I really found no improvement. Your sentences are still broken and un structured. NO OFFENSE MEANT but you cannot bring an over night change in status quo, you need to burn the midnight oil to make a difference. Really I cannot even say that this post of yours was even a cut above.

[COLOR="Red"]Please, explore the English Precis and Composition section of the forum and do what Suresh and Island have recommended you via PMs.[/COLOR]



Regards,

Hey bro check this out too! Start watching English movies instead of listen more English songs... that will change your style i mean speaking power and write the quotes out of them good dialogues will do too well that’s an easy way too nie?;)
And consult dictionary besides what Qurat suggested;)

Qurratulain suggested him at her best.. as well Marshal.. But i think he should watch that movies which has pauses below.. it will make him understand it more easily .. as long as he watch the movies that like he got to understand the word flow of English movies then he can go up without pauses..

The best way is to read articles and watch english movies with subtitles.That would help alot.


Regards

W.H.J

[QUOTE=Qurratulain]Dear Waqar,

I just had a glimpse of your recent posts and found that most of them fall under "News & Articles Section" and are copied/pasted somewhere lacking reference as well. Coming to your request, honestly I can't evaluate your performance on the basis of your posts found under News & Articles Section. The only way for me to evaluate your effort is those posts whereby you've requested something or those where you've given your own opinion like the first post of this thread. And here I really found no improvement. Your sentences are still broken and un structured. NO OFFENSE MEANT but you cannot bring an over night change in status quo, you need to burn the midnight oil to make a difference. Really I cannot even say that this post of yours was even a cut above.

[COLOR="Red"]Please, explore the English Precis and Composition section of the forum and do what Suresh and Island have recommended you via PMs.[/COLOR]



Regards,[/QUOTE]
i m really thanfull of u for told me the right way for improve english
you dont know you are my idol in the cssforum i read alot of thread u posted to forum and me gain alot of knowlegde from u r thread,but u told me
i do not improve my english now i m feeling very ashamed ,i m promising to all moderators and speciall you withen 3 months you will watch alot of changes in my english .....pray for me, if me post news and article in dozen then i say apologize for it.

@ Waqar

Frankly speaking, No one is perfect on this ground. Your persistence , hardwork and patience make you perfect. Do practise as much as you can. This thread is reserved for your enhancement. Post your work under this thread and our conducive members and moderators will accomodate you on daily basis. Firstly, go through the following steps :

1. Try to use simple expressions and words in your speech.

2. Prepare short sentences rather than long one. (like S + V + O. ) ; thats it.

3. Purchase two books of grammar :

a. Oxford Practice Grammar by John Eastwood (for bachelor`s student)
b. A Practical Grammar by A.J Thomson

4. Read the articles which publish in Desi Newspapers (like Dawn , The News etc)

5. Watch English Channels like CNN, National Geograpic, etc . It will ameliorate your knowledge along with english.

6. Write one or two paragraph/paragraphs note under this thread every day.

7. Visit following sites :

[url]http://www.world-english.org/[/url]

[url]http://www.usingenglish.com[/url]

[url]www.antimoon.com[/url]

[url]www.usingenglish.com[/url]

[url]www.global-english.com/index.html[/url]

and offcause

[url]http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...ammar-section/[/url]


You`re welcome to call us anytime. We would be gratified to accomodate with our best.

Best of luck !!!

Allah Nagheban,

Well Waqar, I'm really happy this time to see your enthusiasm. So lets start correcting from today. I'm going to correct each of your sentence and you're supposed to check the mistakes you've made. And then write a short paragraph about [B]"The steps I'm going to take to improve my English"[/B]. and post that short para here in this thread using reply option.



[QUOTE=waqarabro]i m really thanfull of u for told me the right way for improve english[/quote]

[B]Correct:[/B] I am really thankful [U]to[/U] you [U]for[/U] rightly guiding me [U]to [/U]improve my English.

[quote]
you dont know you are my idol in the cssforum i read alot of thread u posted to forum and me gain alot of knowlegde from u r thread,but u told me
i do not improve my english now i m feeling very ashamed ,[/quote]

[B]Correct:[/B] You don't know [U]that[/U] you're my ideal member [U]on [/U]CSS Forum and I read all the threads you post. I gain a lot of knowledge [U]from[/U] your posts, but I feel depressed [U]to [/U]hear [U]from[/U] you that I've not shown any improvement.


[quote]i m promising to all moderators and speciall you withen 3 months you will watch alot of changes in my english .....pray for me, if me post news and article in dozen then i say apologize for it.[/QUOTE]

[B]Correct:[/B] I promise to all Moderators and especially [U]to [/U]you that you'll see a great change [U]with in[/U] three months. I'll improve my English [U]to a [/U]great extent. Please pray [U]for [/U]my success. And I apologize if dozens of my posts in articles' section [U]do not make [/U]any sense.

lets start from today this is paragraph please correct it

today i was going to my friend home ,he called me at m cell and told me come fast at my home,when i was being there he told me my guests came from larkana but me do not a palace ,me need a palace for living of my guests and i told him u say to ur guests these may live at my palace
then he was being very happy from me

dear quratullain please correct the following paragraph

[QUOTE]today i was going to my friend home ,he called me at m cell and told me come fast at my home,when i was being there he told me my guests came from larkana but me do not a palace ,me need a palace for living of my guests and i told him u say to ur guests these may live at my palace
then he was being very happy from me [/QUOTE]

Today I was going at my friend`s home. He called [I][U]on[/U][/I] my cell (omission of me coz it is obvious) and requested to come soon. When i went there (Passive form compel action on u) , He told me [U]that[/U] (indirect form would be better) his guests come from larkana and (me is an object while sentence starts from a subject) he has no place for them to stay. He requested me to arrange place for them. I invited them at my place.


Waqar, You`re doing good. I find enhancement in your speech. Just try to follow rules of grammar.

Chao,