Can someone help me ???
 

Please point out my mistakes in precis .
Passage:
In every country people imagine that they are the best and the cleverest and the others are not so good as they are. The Englishman thinks that he and his country are the best; the Frenchman is very proud of France and everything French. The Germans and Italians think no less of their countries and many Indians imagine that India is in many ways the greatest country in the world. This is wrong. Everybody wants to think well of himself and his country. But really there is no person who has not got some good and some bad qualities. In the same way, there is no country Which is not partly good and partly bad. We must take the good wherever we find it and try to remove the bad wherever it may be. We are, of course, most concerned with our own country, India. Unfortunately, it is in a bad way today. Many of our people are poor and unhappy. They have no joy in their lives. We have to find out how we can make them happier. We have to see what is good in our ways and customs and try to keep it, and whatever is bad we have to throw away. If we find anything good in other countries, we should certainly take it.

No country is perfect .
People across the world wants to believe their own country best among all .In reality ,every country has flaws as well as good things .regardless of its origin goodness should be adopted and bad things should be removed. In india ,people are unhappy because of poverty ,in order to be happier india should keep good traditions ,get rid off bad customs and do not hesitate to take good things from other countries.

salam brother
the main problem,it seems to me is that you have written the main passage by yourself.It would be much better if you take passage from some classic work,such as books of Russel or Bacon.It is generally recommended that the paragraph for precis should be unfamiliar,at least for practice.Moreover the main passage lack coherence.It should be 'Englishmen' instead of Englishman and so on.Come up with a suitable passage and i will be glad to check that for you.

No. I took it from a text book . This was my first precis thats why i took a easier one .

People across the world wants to believe their own country best among all .In reality ,every country has flaws as well as good things .regardless of its origin goodness should be adopted and bad things should be removed. In order to be happier country ,good traditions must be kept ,get rid off bad customs and never hesitate to take good things from other countries.