Passage:
1. MAKE A PRÉCIS OF THE FOLLOWING PASSAGE IN ABOUT ONE THIRD OF ITS LENGTH. Suggest a suitable title also. (20)

Besant describing the middle class of the 9th century wrote " In the first place it was for more a class apart. "In no sense did it belong to society. Men in professions of any kind (except in the Army and Navy) could only belong to society by right of birth and family connections; men in trade—bankers were still accounted tradesmen—could not possibly belong to society. That is to say, if they went to live in the country they were not called upon by the county families and in the town they were not admitted by the men into their clubs, or by ladies into their houses… The middle class knew its own place, respected itself, made its own society for itself, and cheerfully accorded to rank the deference due."

Since then, however, the life of the middle classes had undergone great changes as their numbers had swelled and their influence had increased.

Their already well –developed consciousness of their own importance had deepened. More critical than they had been in the past of certain aspects of aristocratic life, they wee also more concerned with the plight of the poor and the importance of their own values of society, thrift, hand work, piety and respectability thrift, hand work, piety and respectability as examples of ideal behavior for the guidance of the lower orders. Above all they were respectable. There were divergences of opinion as to what exactly was respectable and what was not. There were, nevertheless, certain conventions, which were universally recognized: wild and drunker behaviors were certainly not respectable, nor were godlessness or avert promiscuity, not an ill-ordered home life, unconventional manners, self-indulgence or flamboyant clothes and personal adornments.


Precis
According the Bentham, the Middle class of the 9th century was the least acceptable, dignified and isolated group in the society. All the Professions, except that of uniform, were captured by nepotism. The middle class gave due respect to the other stratas of the society and enjoyed its own isolated being. However, the influence and diginity of the middle class deepend over time due to their increasing numbers and influence. It recognized its own respectable 'ideal behaviour' which also acted as a beacon to the lower classes. Although opinion differed over whether a behaviour is respectable or not. However, certain manners were universally recognized bad overall the classes.

Title: Toil By the Middle class For Stemming a Place in Society

"According the Bentham, the Middle class of the 9th century was the least acceptable, dignified and isolated group in the society." (Its Besant not bentham be careful when quoting authors name. Its a fatal). "All the Professions, except that of uniform, were captured by nepotism." (This sentence lack connectivity with the idea and to the preceding sentence. Re-read the original passage and consider it). "The middle class gave due respect to the other stratas of the society and enjoyed its own isolated being." (This idea feels alien i know what you want to convey but the words chosen are projecting it as an out of blue thing). "the influence and diginity of the middle class deepend over time due to their increasing numbers and influence." (Their influence increased due to their influence? Isn't it contradictory?)

And for the title the word "toil" seems to take us away from the authors idea. The topic talks more about place of middle class not their efforts.

Language and idea absorption are good just conveying needs practice. Good work!

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"Besant describing the middle class of the 9th century wrote " In the first place it was for more a class apart. "