1.We cannot say if he wins the election.
2.I asked him whether he was willing to accompany me to Lahore.
3.Unless our country is militarily strong, our freedom will not be secure.
4.He did not win the race,although he ran very fast .
5.Walk carefully lest you should stumble and fall down.
6.He gave me both his books and notes.
7.If he is your friend, he will surely help you.
8.Because he is kind hearted, he is very popular.
9.My watch is superior, and more expensive to yours.
10.The boy is neither a fool nor naive; he is just simple.
11. Not only is he honest, but also sincere.
12.If you say so, I must believe you.
13.Scarcely had he taken the medicine when he dropped down dead.
14.The poor girl did nothing other than to weep.
15.I will not go unless you come back.
16.He did not speak loud and clear.
17.Even if he is poor he is honest./ Though he is poor , yet he is honest.
18.Why don’t you work the way I tell you?
19.Lions are found both in Asia and Africa.
20.He likes such novels as teach some morals.
21.He is such a man as no one likes.
22.The choice is between death and dishonor.
23.I think he as a silly fellow.
24.In his latest speech, Mr. Naveed said something different from what he used to say earlier.
25.I have not seen him since he wrote last.
26.I fear lest I might fail.
27.As soon as he comes, I shall go.
28.Now as you have come, you will relieve me.
29.This is the reason due to which I do not help you.
30.I doubt if he will come.

1. (I do not think there is any mistake)
4. Although he ran very fast, he did not win the race. (I erased 'but')
6. He gave me his books as well as his notes. (I agree with Naveed, as well)
8. He is kind hearted, therefore he is very popular. (No need of 'because')
9. My watch is superior to and more expensive than yours.
10. Neither the boy is fool nor naive; he is just simple. (I agree with Naveed also)
12. When you say so, I believe you. (explicit belief in someone's integrity)
14. The poor girl did nothing else but, weep.
15. I will not go until you come back. (no need of 'do not')
19. Lions are found in both Asia and Africa.
20. He likes novels which teach some moral. (erase 'such')
21. He is a man that no one likes.
23. I think of/take him as a silly fellow.
26.I fear I might fail.
28.Now that you have come, you will relieve me. (I also agree with Naveed)
29.This is why I do not help you. (I agree with Naveed)
30.I doubt his arrival. (This one is the only confusing in the whole exercise. Please tell me about the proper use of doubt.)

For all that I have missed - I agree with Naveed altogether. Corrections can be made in several ways. By bringing in these new answers, I do not mean to disagree with the corrections of brother Naveed. I am just trying to explore possiblities.

Regards,
Aap ka dulara

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"The race is not over because I haven't won yet."

Adil Memon
Police Service of Pakistan (P.S.P)
37th Common Training Program

1.We cannot say whether he'll win the election.
3.Our freedom will not be secure unless our country is strong military-wise. (militarily?? )
5.Walk carefully lest you should stumble and fall down. (something wrong but i can't find it )
13.Hardly had he taken a sip of the medicine, when all of a sudden he dropped down dead. (yeah, i've read too many of these in THRILLERs back in teenage )
14.The poor girl did nothing except weep. (i want u both to comment on this one bros... Adil, nothing "else" doesn't just seem right... i hope SAM n Saania "barge in" too )
15.I shall not go unless you come back. (Could some1 please clarify the use of shall and will? )
17.Though poor, he is yet honest. (i know i got some odd phrasin sequence)
21.He is a man whom no one likes. (how about whom instead of that? 'He' is a living thing... lol)
22.Its either Death or Dishonor. (sometimes shortcuts r good u know? )
24.In his recent speech, Mr. Naveed said something different from what he used to say earlier.
28.Now that you have come, I shall be relieved. (am i changing it completely? )


Regards,

THE 1

2.I asked him that whether he was willing to accompany me to Lahore.
I asked him if he was willing to accompany me to Lahore.

3.Unless our country is not militarily strong, our freedom will not be secure.
Unless our country is militarily strong, our freedom will not be secure.

6.He gave me both his books as well as his notes.
He gave me both, his books and his notes.

14.The poor girl did nothing else than weep.
The poor did nothing but weep

17.If he is poor. He is honest.
If he is poor then he is honest.

21.He is such a man that no one likes.
He is a man that no one likes.

22.The choice is between death or dishonor.
The choice is between death and dishonor.

23.I think him as a silly fellow.
I think him a silly fellow.

24.In his latest speech, Mr. Naveed has said something different than what he used to say earlier.
In his latest speech, Mr. Naveed said something different from what he used to say earlier.

25.I did not see him since he wrote last.
I have not seen him since he wrote last.
26.I fear I may fail.
I fear I might fail.

28.Now you have come, you will relieve me.
Now that you have come, I shall be relieved.(i agree with brother the1,this is the only way it makes sense)

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Never interrupt your enemy when he is making a mistake - Napolean Bonaparte

thanks saania for this piece of work.it realy helped me to correct my english also

huh i did!!! i'm glad i could help brother

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Never interrupt your enemy when he is making a mistake - Napolean Bonaparte

1. Can I look at your book?

Can I have a look at your book?

2. We heard of him having met with an accident.

We heard of his having met (with) an accident (though there is often some conflict frequently occuring whether to use the 'personal pronoun(object)' or 'possesive adjective', but good grammarians have declared their approval of using both constructions on the contrary.

3. Such students will be allowed to compete who have passed the higher secondary examination.

(Those)Students who have passed the higher secondary examination will (only)be allowed to compete

4. The scoolmaster and the inspector were present there.

The schoolmaster as well as the inspector was present there
Both the schoolmaster and the inspector were present there( the article has to be doubled both before the two nouns)

5. The boy denied to take the money.
The boy denied having taken the money.(because the money had already been stolen before the speaker accused him of theft)

6. Between you and I, there is much rea son in what he says.
Between you and me, there is much reason in what he says

8. You have given false witness.
You have given false evidence( words vary in different taste)

9. No sooner he finished his speech when the clapping begin.
No sooner had he finished his speech than the clapping bagan
No sooner did he finish his speech than the clapping began( in meantime)
He had no sooner finished his speech than the clapping bagan

10. The socialist party is as good if not better than any political party.
The socialist party is not as/so good as any other political party(Preserving the real sense of the sentence.)

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