dear friends i want to know the ways and techniques of essay writing by sir razi abidi. i have heard his name.he is the best teacher for essay but i cant join him due to some financial problems. if any friend who had taken the tuition from sir razi abidi , plz share their experience . waiting for the response from friends.

Sir Razi is the best guide for essay and composition owing to his previous attachment with the fpsc . Let me highlight a few suggestions given by him.
1. Do not start your essay with the introduction but the thesis statement (directly hit the issue).
2. Don't use religious arguments since the religion means blind faith and the end of all arguments. He also advised us not to touch the religious issues because none of us know about the religion properly( different schools of thought interpret the same issues differently).
3. Sir razi said that people fail in essay only because they don’t organize it properly..
HOW TO ORGANISE AN ESSAY?
1. Thesis statement/ issue (hit bulls eye)
2. Extent / impact of above issue on our country/society institutions or on the world.
3. Causes (of the issue).
4. Remedies.
AND YOU ARE DONE
EXAMPLE:
THE CLASH OF INSTITUTIONS
1. Thesis statement/issue.
a. Pakistan is in a great confusion due to the clash of institutions.
b. There is big clash between the government and the judiciary.
2. Extent.
a. Main issues of the people are ignored.
b. The confusion of the supremacy of the parliament or the judiciary.
C. Weak performance of the government.
d. Nobody knows who is at the helm of affairs.
e. The institutional clash has kept away the foreign investment from the country.
f. Military bureaucracy vs. other institutions.
3. Causes
a. Weak institutions.
b. Contempt of court law.
c. The soft corner for insurgency within our institutions.
d. violation of law is a matter of pride.
e. The early rulers did not allow institutions to flourish.
4. REMEDIES
a. Abolition of feudalism and education.
b. Industrialization: economic and intellectual prosperity.
c. The ambiguities in the laws should be corrected.
d. Harmonious working of the institutions.
e. Political desire for powers should be restricted to the powers prescribed by the constitution.

so if we go to sir razi abidi, could we be hopeful of securing as much as 70 or 80 marks in essay? what's his fee?

Please respected seniors and CSP officers tell me the address and phone number of English Teacher Mr. Razi Abidi
please provide the above details as soon as possible.

No teacher can ensure u that many marks. Its only the examiner who would decide how good u r. Is for as sir razi is concerned, he will guide u and assess ur essays. only couple of weeks under his supervision wd make u love writing. his fees is 6 k and he teaches only 3 days a week on monday,wednesday and friday. dont forget to bring 6k on the very first day, else u will make mockery of urself before sir. he teaches at his house. it is very close to pnjab secretariat on abubakar road near krishin nagar. MAKE Sure u arrive before 6 am to take the control of a seat, else u may not get entrance due to the lack of space in a smal 10 by 10 room.

ok thanx for your reply dear, but would you please tell me that how many marks in essay could we get and how many marks can be considered good in essay?

i think to pass an essay is more than good.

Dear i secured 43 marks with no preparation at all in my last attempt, so no need to go to sir Abidi then? and i am quite hopeful that i can done far better than i did last time.....because A penny saved is a penny earned

There are many who secured more then fifty in an attempt and got failed in the next one. You will see many on the forum complaining that they got passed in two attempts and had to see failure in essay in the third one. And I myself have seen people securing in 70s in composition paper in 2010 in 60s in 2011 and getting failed in 2012. So it is better to keep oneself prepared and should be ready to get assistance from the seniors and great teachers of English. I myself cleared essay in both of my attempts and got 71 in composition in 2010 and 62 in 2011. Bu still I am leaving no stone unturned in getting help for essay.

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but you see there is no surety of getting through if we go to a teacher...