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Post Seniors! Please check my idea expansion.

"Man is a architect of his own fate:

This is indeed true that man is a architect of his own fortune. Almighty Allah has bestowed the man with wit and wisdom and created him as the crown of creatures. It is his approach of reasoning and intellection through which he reached at any conclusion. It is undoubtedly a man who molds his destiny with his will power, and not the fate gauge the fortune of a man.

Naturally, life of a man is full of ups and downs. He face many unfavorable circumstances throughout his life and try to compete it with his will power. He moves farward to solve the maze of life. In contrast, some of them abdicate without struggle. Thus, they pass the buck to the fate. But as a matter of fact, this is far away from the truth. Further, the man has reached on the moon and striving hard to keep his foot on the other planets to acquire the secrets of nature.

The Pakistan Movement is the best example of the above maxim. After the War of Independence (1857), the Britishers along with Hindus exploited the rights of the Muslims of India. The Hindus made great efforts to crush the muslims as a nation. But it was the determination of the Muslims to stand in front of the might of Hindus majority. Hence, the Muslims, under the dynamic leadership of Quaid-e-Azam, successfully managed to achieve their bright destiny on 14th August 1947. It is crystal clear that freedom fighters burnt their mid-night oil to architect their own fate.

Another glorious example of Mr. Muhammad Yousuf, a visually disable, got 22nd Position in Central Superior Services (CSS) 2014. He was of the view that with self determination and faith, there is nothing worthwhile that can not be achieve. Thus, He struggled hard to achieve the most prestigious services of Pakistan.

Furthermore, the story of a carpenter boy depicts that how impossible things are made possible. One day a carpenter boy found pain during his work. His neighbour taunt him for the hurt. The boy replied that there is a motive behind it. I am making this because one day i will sit on it. After some time, the neighbour was shocked to see the boy sitting on the chair of Magistrate. Hence the boy changed his own fate through his efforts.

The Crux of the matter is man is a master of his own fate. Undoubtedly, there will be resistance but with the determination and self devotion, he can be successful to overpower the opposition. It is clear that fate do not make the future of the man but man himself architect his own fate.
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