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Our country Pakistan has debtor of billion Dollars the country has been going to backward day by day due to corruption there are many departments corrupt just like WAPDA ,Education departments and such other departments meanwhile due to corruption Pakistani's nation has been facing to many difficulties an electricity Load-shiding, Gas load-shiding for decades so there are 70% people victim of poverty the poor people has been going to backward day by day because those poor people can not get their basic rights because ofcorruption, The development projects are incomplete usually areas of sindh URBAN as well as RURAL there road networks did not repair for decades ,if we see that education, billion of rupees budget approved in 2016 for repairing schools ,collages but there are 60% schools except teachers there are no any teacher staffs in schools especially in rural areas ,we are very behind to other nations because of corruption ,unless we will put behind bars to the corrupt persons ,we will not root up corruption ,The C.C TV cameras should be installed every where on offices if any people who belong to government as well as other department if he involves in corruption the government should take struck action against him whereas in this way we can end the roots of corruption.
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Our country, Pakistan, is the debtor of millions of dollars.

It is going from bad to worst conditions due to rampant corruption with every passing day.

Curruption prevails in various departments for instance, WAPDA, POLICE and education etc.

Pakiatanis face serious challenges in form of power shut off, gase load shedding and poverty. Due to corruption poor masses cannot fulfill there basic needs and are becoming poorer with time.

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Our country Pakistan has debtor of billion Dollars the country has been going to backward day by day due to corruption there are many departments corrupt just like WAPDA ,Education departments and such other departments meanwhile due to corruption Pakistani's nation has been facing to many difficulties an electricity Load-shiding, Gas load-shiding for decades so there are 70% people victim of poverty the poor people has been going to backward day by day because those poor people can not get their basic rights because ofcorruption, The development projects are incomplete usually areas of sindh URBAN as well as RURAL there road networks did not repair for decades ,if we see that education, billion of rupees budget approved in 2016 for repairing schools ,collages but there are 60% schools except teachers there are no any teacher staffs in schools especially in rural areas ,we are very behind to other nations because of corruption ,unless we will put behind bars to the corrupt persons ,we will not root up corruption ,The C.C TV cameras should be installed every where on offices if any people who belong to government as well as other department if he involves in corruption the government should take struck action against him whereas in this way we can end the roots of corruption.
Ok,this is a complete mess.You should check your text in Microsoft word or other grammar checkers,which will rectify the most basic errors.Afterward you can discuss the advanced points such as oder of the text,vocabulary,content,etc on this forum.
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Our country Pakistan has debtor of billion Dollars the country has been going to backward day by day due to corruption there are many departments corrupt just like WAPDA ,Education departments and such other departments meanwhile due to corruption Pakistani's nation has been facing to many difficulties an electricity Load-shiding, Gas load-shiding for decades so there are 70% people victim of poverty the poor people has been going to backward day by day because those poor people can not get their basic rights because ofcorruption, The development projects are incomplete usually areas of sindh URBAN as well as RURAL there road networks did not repair for decades ,if we see that education, billion of rupees budget approved in 2016 for repairing schools ,collages but there are 60% schools except teachers there are no any teacher staffs in schools especially in rural areas ,we are very behind to other nations because of corruption ,unless we will put behind bars to the corrupt persons ,we will not root up corruption ,The C.C TV cameras should be installed every where on offices if any people who belong to government as well as other department if he involves in corruption the government should take struck action against him whereas in this way we can end the roots of corruption.
Our country, Pakistan, is a debtor of billions of Dollars, and the country has been moving backward day by day due to corruption. There are many departments that are corrupt, such as WAPDA, Education departments, and other such departments. Because of corruption, a Pakistani nation has been facing too many difficulties, ranging from an electricity Load-shading, Gas load-shading for decades. Besides, there are 70% people who are the victim of poverty, which is driving the people to a backward way of life day by day. The reason is that these poor people cannot get their basic rights because of corruption. The development projects are incomplete, especially in areas of Sindh URBAN as well as RURAL, where road networks are not repaired for decades. In the sector of education, billions of rupees budget are approved in 2016 for repairing schools, colleges, but there are 60% schools without
Teacher staffs, especially in rural areas. We lag behind other nations because of corruption. Unless we put behind bars those who are corrupt, we will not root out corruption. The C.C TV cameras should be installed everywhere in offices, and if any official, in government as well as other departments, is involved in corruption, the government should take strict action against him. In this way, we can end the menace of corruption.


I have made some minor tweaks to your text,not deviating from the original vocabulary and content.Maybe other can make it,even more, better.
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