seniors please comment

Variety is inevitable to live a happy and charming life. It provides the people different opportunities and a choice of their own. One can see his taste and do what one likes. In the professional life when one lose his job he may seek another. One can explore many fields and opt for where he seeks satisfaction. Likewise one can select one from a variety of hobbies according to his nature and living style. He could choose which requires lesser money and strength. If one is healthy and rich he may go for adventurous jobs and if one is poor he may find lucrative jobs. For example, horse-riding demands a lot of strength and swiss watch asks for money. One may not enjoy the ride on Mercedes car due to lack of money but he can buy a cheap bike or what he can afford. Conversely speaking, if one has a few choices in his life, he would soon fed up with their use and would be destined to feel boredom. We see that if one has passion for cricket and he is bound by someone to play football, he may not perform well. Most of the people always go with their taste and needs. They often go to those shops which contain variety of shoes, clothes etc. They always like different foods on different days. This fact is also well known among big enterprises. They have developed big research and development cells to introduce new designs with wide variety. Variety is a psychological need of a human. It gives him a mental satisfaction and provides him opportunity to select things by his own will. A child would not play with a single toy and would always ask for more. He would be more satisfied if he is given a number of toys to play. One can rightly say that variety is essential to live a colorful life; it blends one’s life with spice and charm.

@ Irfan Ali,

Nice effort, but try to improve more.

And

Change it in another words, It seems dull

Regards,

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كُلُّ نَفْسٍ ذَآئِقَةُ الْمَوْتِ - Every Soul Must Have The Taste Of Death

Life is full of colors of different variety. Variety plays a vital role in our life and provide opportunity to choose hot or cold, spicy or sweet, salt or paper, white or black, rolex or rado etc. Variety flourishes the quality of product and increases the competition to build best for the life. Variety is the creation of Almighty God, It exists before creation of world, In Shahi-Bhukari " There are verities of heaven, the most piety will be awarded the best heaven ". If we analyze, We find variety in nature as summer and winter, water as river and sea, rock as sedimentary or igneous, and human as pious and atheist. Sense of human evaluate the varieties and choose the most desire one to enjoy. Variety widens the horizon of life to pick the most you like, among myriads. Life without variety is dull and one sided.


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كُلُّ نَفْسٍ ذَآئِقَةُ الْمَوْتِ - Every Soul Must Have The Taste Of Death

1st of thanks for nice comments on my attempt. secondly you have written a very good paragraph...really giving me a benchmark... but let me say some words... i think it is a little bit short and you have not much elaborated the other side..... "Life without variety is dull and one sided " you must also explain about the consequences, if there would be no variety how it would the affect life..... Thanks

plz also comment on my attempt which i did on the topic " islam has failed in pakistan to unite the people.........."