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Riaz Ahmed Alizai Monday, September 06, 2010 06:37 PM

plz comment: Give all thy ears but few thy tongue
 
It is requested to all specially seniors that please have a check of my first expansion.I shall be thankful to all for this act.

Give all thy ears but few thy tongue

Many events induce sympathy,many actions allure an Individual's ambitions,many voices entice participation and many remarks invite emotive feelings.Human is gregarious,no doubt about that,who feels alike its fellow beings,its thoughts,feelings,perception,actions and behavioral approach are subject to change.There may come occasions demanding a rational approach together with irrational consequences.Actions which seem pragmatic and cohesive may drive a wedge among many,and participation seeming useless may bring potential changes.All these depend upon one's will of agreement and disagreement with the cause.Agreement does not mean to push the wind against odds together with those whose clandestine aims may not be fruitful.And disagreement does not mean to disengage oneself from the efforts extended for a larger good.All is about implicit faith in the matter and a soft revolutionary approach when it comes to any cause,which demand for decision making aptitude.Decision making in both of its manifestation characterizes its objectivity.Feeling like other feel is not a bad idea,but acting like others do may rank differently.It is the authentic approach for one not to follow the footsteps blindly,but it is the destructive approach to follow things without being apprised of their nature and objectivity.Meaningless would be the say when it would not have any meaning,and meaningful might be the action when it might not have any loophole.But,it is all about the dialectical capability and dithering approach of an individual.Favorable approach is to pursue what the instinct demands rather then getting on heels to the ends which appeal for their ultimate success.Better follow one's best self if not the better self.

Xeric Tuesday, September 07, 2010 10:31 PM

Your expression is awesome according to my perception. Once saw your query about practicing English Essay (I think) so, could not reply to that post as an expert but here I only advice you to go for voracious study rest is the task of examination hall and you will perform well. ;)

chaudhry610 Tuesday, September 07, 2010 11:43 PM

Use of Vocabulary should be.......
 
Dear,
Ur work is no doubt awesome:clap but in examination viewpoint I believe the language should be simple,easy and excess use of heavy words should be avoided.:excl:

Riaz Ahmed Alizai Wednesday, September 08, 2010 03:05 PM

Wash AAthke
 
@chaudary
thanks dear,,,Yeah you are absolutely correct,for i was told by another friend as regards simple language.Onwards,i shall try my level best to avoid lexical complexities.
Regards,

unsolved_Mystery Wednesday, September 08, 2010 05:43 PM

@ Riaz
 
[FONT=Comic Sans MS][SIZE=3][COLOR=purple]Yes Riaz brother! To be very true, i always have to read your post TWICE , but it is also correct as someone said above that from examination point of view, it may be dangerous if the examiner holds a degree from some Madrissa :dd[/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT]

rishzzz Wednesday, September 08, 2010 06:03 PM

[QUOTE=Riaz Ahmed Alizai;211338]It is requested to all specially seniors that please have a check of my first expansion.I shall be thankful to all for this act.

Give all thy ears but few thy tongue

[B]Many events induce sympathy,many actions allure an Individual's ambitions,many voices entice participation and many remarks invite emotive feelings.Human is gregarious,no doubt about that,who feels alike its fellow beings,its thoughts,feelings,perception,actions and behavioral approach are subject to change[/B][B][COLOR="Blue"]redundant usage of MANY and COMMAS[/COLOR][/B].There may come occasions demanding a rational approach together with irrational consequences.Actions which seem pragmatic and cohesive may drive a wedge among many[B],[/B]and participation seeming useless may bring potential changes.All these depend upon one's will of agreement and disagreement with the cause.Agreement does not mean to push the wind against odds together with those whose clandestine aims may not be fruitful.[B]And[/B] disagreement does not mean to disengage oneself from the efforts extended for a larger good.All is about implicit faith in the matter and a soft revolutionary approach when it comes to any cause[B],[/B]which demand for decision making aptitude.Decision making in both of its manifestation characterizes its objectivity.Feeling like other feel is not a bad idea[B],[/B]but acting like others do may rank differently.It is the authentic approach for one not to follow the footsteps blindly[B],[/B]but it is the destructive approach to follow things without being apprised of their nature and objectivity[B][COLOR="blue"](outstanding expression of words).[/COLOR][/B]Meaningless would be the say when it would not have any meaning,and meaningful might be the action when it might not have any loophole.But,it is all about the dialectical capability and dithering approach of an individual.Favorable approach is to pursue what the instinct demands rather then getting on heels to the ends which appeal for their ultimate success.Better follow one's best self if not the better self.[/QUOTE]

One of the very few expansions i liked in cssforum, it would have been the best if you would have not reduandantly used some words as i marked above, you misused at some places qommas and make ur expansion a lil more lengthy, these things will beautify your expansion.

You have everything what an examiner demands in CSS....My best wishes for you


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