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Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself.

Time we live in always has three dimensions which are past, present and future. We learn from the past, implement our learning in the present and plan for the future based on our aspirations and the limitations that our past and present puts on our aspirations. Today and tomorrow in this phrase describe our present and future dimension of the time. If we manage our today well in the light of lessons learnt from the past, indeed we are also taking care of the tomorrow. No doubt future planning is an important aspect for the success but our present actions only can provide a solid base for the fulfillment our aspirations and progress in every aspect of life.
If we look around in different fields of life, be it sports, economy, technology, politics or social services like education, health care etc. The first thing that comes in our minds about the success or failure in that field is how effectively one is dealing with it in present time in comparison with the past. If it’s better than the past then progress is being made and future will be also good.
There is another important aspect that we need to look into when we are discussing our strategy about present and future that is nature disasters. These do happen and a future planning is always required to deal with these. Based on the past experiences strategies are evolved, planning is done and actions are taken so that their impact will be minimized. Areas in the world which are prone to earthquakes or floods, necessary amendments are incorporated in structures so that these can bear the worst scenario. Similarly, those countries which are performing well on economic, social and technological aspects today are more likely to perform better in the future as well.
From the above discussion it is very that the success of tomorrow lies in how effectively we deal with the challenges at hand. Future may hold something which may not be in our control but we can cater for those things which are expected to challenge us tomorrow with our effective work today.
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That is good dear, your expansion is really nice. Don't you think that you had to mention some references or quotations? Overall your expansion is a nice one.
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Dear , yes there is this discrepancy that I failed to give some good examples in this expansion .
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Dear , yes there is this discrepancy that I failed to give some good examples in this expansion .
Why didn't you go for the CTP? What are the reasons? Aren't you satisfy with MLCG???
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Why didn't you go for the CTP? What are the reasons? Aren't you satisfy with MLCG???
I have already completed my CTP and right now doing STP. It's a really good group and i am satisfied but being satisfied doesn't mean that a person should give up to strive for his first preference.

Trying to get my first preference.
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Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself.

Time we live in always has three dimensions which are past, present and future. We learn from the past, implement our learning in the present and plan for the future based on our aspirations. Today and tomorrow in this phrase describe our present and future dimensions of the time. If we manage our today well in the light of lessons learnt from the past, indeed we are also taking care of the tomorrow to some extent. No doubt future planning has always been an important aspect for the long term success and we cannot ignore it. Our religion also gives us direction to plan for the future to deal with the challenges. This has gained more importance in this era of globalization.
If we look around in different fields of life, be it sports, economy, technology, politics or social services like education, health care etc. , the first thing that comes in our minds about the success or failure in that field is how effectively one is dealing with it in present time in comparison with the past. If it’s better than the past then progress is being made and future will be also good. Today China is the fastest growing economy of the world. If she is successful in dealing with the challenges at hand, there is strong possibility that it will keep on performing well on this end as this current progress will act as a solid base to achieve future aspirations.
In this era of globalization and competition, future planning has gained more importance. For survival in the comity of nations, it is now mandatory to plan things in advance to be competitive. The countries who failed to plan things are facing severe challenges today and are likely to face in the future. Water scarcity is one such challenge that is haunting the world now. Our country is also likely to face severe water shortage in near future. A rigorous planning and implementation is required to deal with it in future. Similarly growing population is another concern for most of the third world countries. For these countries to compete with the developed world they need an effective future planning to manage and utilize their resources in the best possible way.
Our religion also provides us with the guideline to strike a balance between present and the future. Islam preaches a person to strive for to arrange the resources for the next meal. Spend and use resources wisely and justly. Similarly, it directs to make all necessary arrangements to fight against the evil forces. At the same time, it gives a direction to balance the priorities and arrangements according to our stay on the earth and in the hereafter.
From the above discussion it is very that the success of tomorrow lies in how effectively we deal with the challenges at hand. Future may hold something which may not be in our control but we can cater for those things which are expected to challenge our survival tomorrow with our effective work today. We cannot ignore future prosperity at the expense of the leisure today.
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Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself.

Time we live in always has three dimensions which are past, present and future. We learn from the past, implement our learning in the present and plan for the future based on our aspirations. Today and tomorrow in this phrase describe our present and future dimensions of the time. If we manage our today well in the light of lessons learnt from the past, indeed we are also taking care of the tomorrow to some extent. No doubt future planning has always been an important aspect for the long term success and we cannot ignore it. Our religion also gives us direction to plan for the future to deal with the challenges. This has gained more importance in this era of globalization.
If we look around in different fields of life, be it sports, economy, technology, politics or social services like education, health care etc. , the first thing that comes in our minds about the success or failure in that field is how effectively one is dealing with it in present time in comparison with the past. If it’s better than the past then progress is being made and future will be also good. Today China is the fastest growing economy of the world. If she is successful in dealing with the challenges at hand, there is strong possibility that it will keep on performing well on this end as this current progress will act as a solid base to achieve future aspirations.
In this era of globalization and competition, future planning has gained more importance. For survival in the comity of nations, it is now mandatory to plan things in advance to be competitive. The countries who failed to plan things are facing severe challenges today and are likely to face in the future. Water scarcity is one such challenge that is haunting the world now. Our country is also likely to face severe water shortage in near future. A rigorous planning and implementation is required to deal with it in future. Similarly growing population is another concern for most of the third world countries. For these countries to compete with the developed world they need an effective future planning to manage and utilize their resources in the best possible way.
Our religion also provides us with the guideline to strike a balance between present and the future. Islam preaches a person to strive for to arrange the resources for the next meal. Spend and use resources wisely and justly. Similarly, it directs to make all necessary arrangements to fight against the evil forces. At the same time, it gives a direction to balance the priorities and arrangements according to our stay on the earth and in the hereafter.
From the above discussion it is very that the success of tomorrow lies in how effectively we deal with the challenges at hand. Future may hold something which may not be in our control but we can cater for those things which are expected to challenge our survival tomorrow with our effective work today. We cannot ignore future prosperity at the expense of the leisure today.
Again it is a good one. I like your style very much. It is quite impressive, simple way of thoughts. What style yar! Bravo! Your simplicity is the most powerful weapon in your expansion. I believe there is no need to mention any quote or reference..

Please attempt this topic

"Beggers can not be choosers"...
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Thanks. Bro , i will give a try to this topic and will share. It's a good topic.
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Check this out friends.

SPONTANEITY AND CREATIVITY AS SYMBOLS OF FREEDOM(CSS- 2007)

Freedom is a combination of two things namely spontaneity and creativity. A man is said to be creative and present mind, if he has the freedom. Freedom breeds creativity. This is why spontaneity and creativity is a symbol of freedom. Contrary to this, if a person is not free from the shackles of bondage, he can never become a creative man. It is just because of the boundaries put around him which never allows him to think out of the box. In addition, parents usually try to mould their children in a free and open atmosphere. They do not restrict them unnecessarily, no extra burden, and no rude or strict behaviors. In this way they make their children strong, confident,creative and present mind. This is what freedom breeds. By the same token, we can see the spontaneity and creativity of today’s media. Today’s, media is so free to publish or telecast anything which it could never do before. It is now creative and publish spontaneous news round the clock. How this happened? It happened just because of freedom of speech. Additionally, if we peep into the history, we have industrial revolution. This revolution was the direct result of freedom. As a matter of fact, the ruler of that time gave immense authority and financial help to their researchers so that they could make their experiments possible. They, as a result, invented numerous new technologies. Today’s world is reaping the fruits of such inventions and experiments. All this happened just because of spontaneity and creativity that are the direct outcome of freedom. Conclusively, all of the above mentioned examples proved that freedom is a cornerstone of new developments without which one may not make anything possible. It is also because spontaneity and creativity is a symbol of freedom.
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SPONTANEITY AND CREATIVITY AS SYMBOLS OF FREEDOM(CSS- 2007)

Freedom is a combination of two things namely spontaneity and creativity. A man is said to be creative and present mind, if he has the freedom. Freedom breeds creativity. This (That) is why spontaneity and creativity is a symbol of freedom. Contrary to this, if a person is not free from the shackles of bondage, he can never become a creative man. It is just because of the boundaries put around him which never allows him to think out of the box. In addition, parents usually try to mould their children in a free and open atmosphere. They do not restrict them unnecessarily, no extra burden, and no rude or strict behaviors. In this way they make their children strong, confident,creative and present mind. This is what freedom breeds. By (To the same token, we can see the spontaneity and creativity of today’s media. Today’s, media is so free to publish or telecast anything which it could never do before. It is now creative and publish spontaneous news round the clock. How this happened? It happened just because of freedom of speech. Additionally, if we peep into the history, we have industrial revolution. This revolution was the direct result of freedom. As a matter of fact, the ruler of that time gave immense authority and financial help to their researchers so that they could make their experiments possible. They, as a result, invented numerous new technologies. Today’s world is reaping the fruits of such inventions and experiments. All this happened just because of spontaneity and creativity that are the direct outcome of freedom. Conclusively, all of the above mentioned examples proved that freedom is a cornerstone of new developments without which one may not make anything possible. It is also because spontaneity and creativity is a symbol of freedom.

I have pointed out some of your technical mistakes. Overall it is a very nice one write up...
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