SOME PEOPLE CONFUSE MISMANAGEMENT WITH BAD LUCK

Confusing mismanagement with ill-fortune is the last resort for those who want to save their grace after confronting failure or the poor consequences of a case or event. The poor management skills are put in the sack of bad luck and hence, many cases of negligence are beautifully tagged as cases of lady luck’s miser smiles. This is ironic how man has revolutionized the state of excellence by the mere induction of bad luck into his matters.

The world around us is full of such instances starting right from the institution of family and goes beyond the international and global boundaries.

The First World War was the result of a badly mismanaged Balkan crisis in the summer of 1914 rather than the product of long standing rivalries between the great powers.

The recent uncontrolled flood was an outcome of mismanaged rivers but the authorities have merely termed it as an avoidable ‘natural disaster’; this confusion between the mismanagement and ill-fortune has left the masses in a state of chaos.

The incident of three years old Imanae Malik’s death was a sheer mismanagement on the behalf of hospital’s staff but when the father let the cat out of the bag, doctors had nothing to utter but blame the destiny for this breathtaking incident. The action taken against the hospital staff is another tale of mismanagement.

The deplorable ‘art’ of confusing mismanagement with bad luck is a learned behavior which a child learns from his elders and till the same child grows up into a ‘potentially’ responsible citizen, this becomes his second nature. This collective behavior can lead to the chaos in a society. Hence, people should make efforts not to confuse the mismanaged cases with bad luck to avoid occurrence of potential chaos in the society.

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Some people confuse mismanagement with bad luck

Mostly failure is attributed to bad luck without in-depth analysis of ones own skills. God created man as a superior creature and bestowed him with unlimited energies of body and mind for commanding his destiny. However man underestimates his abilities and capacities while resorting for super natural happenings. Accordingly the heavy dependence on destiny and paranormal happenings in ones life undermines ones confidence and performance; as he attributes everything, good or bad, to his fate and remotely strives for a better result. Likewise, an aspirant ascribing the causes of failure in CSS exam to bad luck is tantamount to question the capabilities of human being at large. Similarly, a person performs very faintly in the task and failed badly; and without counselling his own abilities he question the credibility of examining authorities. Correspondingly the abilities and skills of such a person vanish with the passage of time and he turns cynic. There is saying that “The winds and waves are always on the side of the ablest navigators”. Nothing in this world is difficult and bigger than the will of human being; the mega structures of stupendous Taj Mahal and miraculous Pyramids of Egypt are manifestation of human imagination and capacities. Additionally, the every scientific discovery gives ample proof of human’s extra ordinary power. In such scenario one has to alter his path and channelise his abilities to get the desired result. Thus, the stars have nothing to do in our life instead we ourselves are underling.






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Some people confuse mismanagement with bad luck

- I guess you can use cynic too in that sentence.
-It's a grammer evaluation, i guess he'll give you an in-depth evaluation.

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Some people confuse mismanagement with bad luck

Mostly failure is attributed to bad luck without an in-depth analysis of ones own skills. God created man as a superior creature and bestowed him with unlimited energies of body and mind for commanding his destiny. However, man underestimates his abilities and capacities and resort to super natural happenings. Accordingly, the heavy dependence on destiny and paranormal happenings in ones life undermines ones confidence and performance; as he attributes everything, good or bad, to his fate and remotely strives for a better result. Likewise, an aspirant ascribing the causes of failure in the CSS exam to bad luck is tantamount to question the capabilities of human being at large. Similarly, a person performs very faintly in the task and failed badly; and without counseling his own abilities, he questions the credibility of examining authorities. Correspondingly, the abilities and skills of such a person vanish with the passage of time and he turns cynic. There is a saying that “The winds and waves are always on the side of the ablest navigators”. Nothing in this world is difficult and bigger than the will of human being; the mega structures of stupendous Taj Mahal and miraculous Pyramids of Egypt are manifestation of human imagination and capacities. Additionally, the every scientific discovery gives ample proof of a human’s extraordinary power. In such scenario one has to alter his path and channelize his abilities to get the desired outcome. Thus, the stars have nothing to do in our life instead we ourselves are underling.



It is Grammatically revised version of my expansion
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the amended version of the previous expansion
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In a strategy it is important to see distant things close and take a distanced view of closed things
A strategy is indeed a plan chalked out to achieve the specific goal. A strategy varies in its nature and degree. It is designed by keeping in view the ground realities and after thorough observation of its pros and cons. It plays significant role in inter-state and intra-state relations and also in the development of the country. The failure or success of a strategy breeds widespread effects. Therefore, it is imperative that while planning a strategy its outcomes in short run and long run should be evaluated. Thus, in this regard it is important to see distant things close and the should also take a distanced view of close things.
History is replete with such example where a strategy is designed by keeping in view above tactics and proved fruitful. The truce of Hudabiya was signed between Muslims and Quresh in the sixth century. The terms and conditions laid down in the treaty were unfavorable on the part of Muslims. However, Hazart Muhammad (PBUH) accepted these harsh and difficult conditions which ultimately brought grandeur victory for Muslims. In fact it was the political acumen of Hazart Muhammad (PBUH) who viewed distant things in a closed view and close things in a broad view.
Sir Syed Ahmed Khan was a great Muslim luminary during the British rule in the Indo-Pak subcontinent. He realized the importance of education for the amelioration of the Muslims in the sub-continent. In this context, he planned a strategy to embark on the policy of acquiring western education. In this sphere, he viewed something distant as something close i.e. improvement of the downtrodden Muslims and in this regard, he took the distanced view of the close thing i.e. attainment of western education. The strategy became successful which culminated in the achievement of separate homeland for Muslims.
It in concluded that a strategy plays pivotal role in development of a country and relations among countries. Therefore, there is no denying fact that while designing a strategy it is important to see the distant thing close and take a distanced view of close things

@ XAARA
jenny u haven't grasp the meaning of the quotation. the thing you mentioned in your expansion is that people use the lame excuse of Bad luck factor to hide their failure. but the quotation actually says that People really think that they have made their efforts but the resultant failure is due to bad luck. They don't deny the fact that they haven't made efforts.They actually think that we have made proper efforts but even then they have to face failure so its their bad luck.
They are not using bad luck as a tool to hide their poor efforts.
Complete confusion about the statement.
The First World War was the result of a badly mismanaged Balkan crisis in the summer of 1914 rather than the product of long standing rivalries between the great powers.
irrelevant example.
The recent uncontrolled flood was an outcome of mismanaged rivers but the authorities have merely termed it as an avoidable ‘natural disaster’; this confusion between the mismanagement and ill-fortune has left the masses in a state of chaos.
its not only about mismanagement.other inevitable factors also contributed to the cause.
when the father let the cat out of the bag,
not properly used idiom.
The deplorable ‘art’ of confusing mismanagement with bad luck is a learned behavior which a child learns from his elders and till the same child grows up into a ‘potentially’ responsible citizen, this becomes his second nature. This collective behavior can lead to the chaos in a society. Hence, people should make efforts not to confuse the mismanaged cases with bad luck to avoid occurrence of potential chaos in the society.
again the same wrong meaning that u deduced out of the quotation.

bus yehi mistakes thin.baqi sb theek likha hai




1)its not about the knowledge of skills its about management of skills.
2)you have written expansion about PEOPLE OVER DEPEND ON THEIR LUCK AND UNDERESTIMATE THEIR SKILLS.
a complete mess of the topics. write again.

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SOME PEOPLE CONFUSE MISMANAGMENT WITH LUCk
Luck and management are two important factors behind success.but some people when fail in their goals due to mismanagement and lack of hard work they blame luck for their failure. But this is not true.the fact is that luck is one’s own hands.one can even change one’s bad luck with hard work and proper management.

We can refer to many instances when people as well as governments blame luck and nature for their failure in managing their affairs.the most recent example of that was floods in Pakistan.although government and people in many areas had enough time to get prepared to face the calamity and could have minimized the loses.but they failed in it and blamed luck for it that they were destined to face it.many muslims have failed to understand that the reason of their backwardness is not luck but mismanagement of their affairs like education,economy and politics.similarly when people fail to succeed in their aims they again hold the luck responsible.they even do not want to think for a second that whether they had put the maximum effort in it or not.

In the end it is important to mention that there is also a luck factor.but it is also a reality that God help those who help themselves by managing their affairs properly and sincerely with hard work.

beta ap ne bhi wohi mistake ki hai jo uper walon ki point out ki hai. wrong interpretation of the quotation

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Shabdon mein kya tareef karoon aap ki MUSSAA
Aap shabdon mein kahan bandh payenge.
Kabhi mere aankhon mein jhaank kar dekho,
Hazaron alfaz khud-b-khud bikhar jayenge.

sir i could not understand where im wrong please point out my shortcomings are the examples not relevant?