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Some people confuse mismanagement with bad luck


The statement ascribes human bad management to luck though fate is least to blame. Many people are inclined to pass their failures in life to destiny, which is not correct.If you fail in the css examination, do not blame your fate, as it has nothing to do with your failure or success. Failure in the Css examination can be attributed to a number of factors. The candidate may be poor in English and his expression may not be up to the mark. The candidates believe that they put the great effort in preparation of exams but bad luck ruins all their efforts.
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In Pakistani society mostly people prefer arrange marriages. Parents find different proposals for their daughters and marry them according to their choice. It is their mismanagement that they don’t investigate about proposal properly. After marriage many things create disorder and they suddenly come to know that the relation was actually built on false promises. Parents believe that it is our daughter’s bad luck because marriage is gamble. It was parents’ responsibility to investigate of proposal thoroughly before marriage. Parents think that they try their level best in investigation of their daughter’s proposal but bad luck actually ruins all this.

If you drive fast, you may not be to negotiate blind turns properly. Your car can meet an accident. The responsibility of car accident cannot be put on blind corner or for that matter on fate. And after fast driving a person sure meet to an accident and will curse on his fate. To drive safely should be the foremost quality of all drivers. Hence people instead of cursing fate, should curse themselves who are incapable to handle driving properly.

The conclusion is that man should avoid blaming external forces for his failures rather he should rectify the loopholes contributing to failures. Man should come out of his narcist world to own failings in management. Luck exists but man should do extraordinary effort for accomplishment of his task. We need to prefer on good management rather than blaming and mourning on fate.
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SOME PEOPLE CONFUSE MISMANAGEMENT WITH BAD LUCK

Most often the let down in certain affairs are regarded to a bad luck without an in-depth analysis of ones managerial skills. A person having plenty of knowledge can still confront with fiasco due to mismanagement of that knowledge . Take the case of the CSS, which is the exam of knowledge and management, in which most of the aspirants fail owing to mishandling of subject material in given period of time but they unknowingly ascribe the failure to their destiny. Similarly, God has bestowed us with unlimited resources and infinite energy of body and mind; but mismanagement in the utilization these resources and ascribing the undesired outcome to supernatural happening is tantamount to running from our responsibilities. For instance Pakistan has abundance of human and natural resources, but mismanagement on part of policy makers and executors are usually regarding as destiny and bad luck of Pakistani nation. Likewise, the sad event of debacle of the East Pakistan in 1971 is the ample proof of mishandling of issue on part of the civil and the military bureaucracy, however ascribing it to bad luck is just not fair. Thus, the lack of effectiveness and efficiency on ones part shouldn’t be ascribed to ones destiny or bad luck instead enhance ones managerial skills.
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SOME PEOPLE CONFUSE MISMANAGEMENT WITH BAD LUCK
This proverb denotes that bad luck and mismanagement are two separate concepts.people often take mismanagement as synonymous to bad luck.managment is a factor which is completely under the control of humans.but luck is beyond his control.mismanagment results from lack of understanding and inefficiency but luck is what God has destined for us.
The economic decline of Pakistan is mostly due to mismanagement.pakistan is facing severe water crises because it has failed to manage its water resources efficiently.God has bestowed Pakistan with vast natural resources but e have failed to manage and utilize them to our advantage.there is no luck factor to blame for these mismanagements so we cannot take it as our bad luck.Similarly if student has not taken care of his time management and was not well prepared ,he fails in exam.but his failure is not the result of bad luck as some people would call it without knowing the main reason behind the failure that is mismanagement.history is witness that nations fell when they failed to manage their sovereign status and unity.the nations who failed to manage their affairs on their own had to face humiliation and foreign subjugation.Holy Quran also asks its followers to manage their affairs with mutual consultation.
Hence it is clear that there is no connection of mismanagment with bad luck.humans themselves are responsible for their actions and results.then why to blame luck?proper and efficient management is key to success not luck.Infact God like those and luck also favours those who manage their affairs properly with hard work and do not blame luck for their mismanagement.
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In Pakistani society mostly people prefer arrange marriages. Parents find different proposals for their daughters and marry them according to their choice. It is their mismanagement that they don’t investigate about proposal properly. After marriage many things create disorder and they suddenly come to know that the relation was actually built on false promises. Parents believe that it is our daughter’s bad luck because marriage is gamble. It was parents’ responsibility to investigate of proposal thoroughly before marriage. Parents think that they try their level best in investigation of their daughter’s proposal but bad luck actually ruins all this.

If you drive fast, you may not be to negotiate blind turns properly. Your car can meet an accident. The responsibility of car accident cannot be put on blind corner or for that matter on fate. And after fast driving a person sure meet to an accident and will curse on his fate. To drive safely should be the foremost quality of all drivers. Hence people instead of cursing fate, should curse themselves who are incapable to handle driving properly.

The conclusion is that man should avoid blaming external forces for his failures rather he should rectify the loopholes contributing to failures. Man should come out of his narcist world to own failings in management. Luck exists but man should do extraordinary effort for accomplishment of his task. We need to prefer on good management rather than blaming and mourning on fate.
poor examples with a wrong conclusion as the conclusion is not what the quotation wants to say

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SOME PEOPLE CONFUSE MISMANAGEMENT WITH BAD LUCK
This proverb denotes that bad luck and mismanagement are two separate concepts.people often take mismanagement as synonymous to bad luck.managment is a factor which is completely under the control of humans.but luck is beyond his control.mismanagment results from lack of understanding and inefficiency but luck is what God has destined for us.
The economic decline of Pakistan is mostly due to mismanagement.pakistan is facing severe water crises because it has failed to manage its water resources efficiently.God has bestowed Pakistan with vast natural resources but e have failed to manage and utilize them to our advantage.there is no luck factor to blame for these mismanagements so we cannot take it as our bad luck.Similarly if student has not taken care of his time management and was not well prepared ,he fails in exam.but his failure is not the result of bad luck as some people would call it without knowing the main reason behind the failure that is mismanagement.history is witness that nations fell when they failed to manage their sovereign status and unity.the nations who failed to manage their affairs on their own had to face humiliation and foreign subjugation.Holy Quran also asks its followers to manage their affairs with mutual consultation.
Hence it is clear that there is no connection of mismanagment with bad luck.humans themselves are responsible for their actions and results.then why to blame luck?proper and efficient management is key to success not luck.Infact God like those and luck also favours those who manage their affairs properly with hard work and do not blame luck for their mismanagement.
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some people confuse mismanagement with bad luck

most often the let down in certain affairs are regarded to a bad luck without an in-depth analysis of ones managerial skills. A person having plenty of knowledge can still confront with fiasco due to mismanagement of that knowledge . Take the case of the css, which is the exam of knowledge and management, in which most of the aspirants fail owing to mishandling of subject material in given period of time but they unknowingly ascribe the failure to their destiny. Similarly, god has bestowed us with unlimited resources and infinite energy of body and mind; but mismanagement in the utilization these resources and ascribing the undesired outcome to supernatural happening is tantamount to running from our responsibilities. For instance pakistan has abundance of human and natural resources, but mismanagement on part of policy makers and executors are usually regarding as destiny and bad luck of pakistani nation. Likewise, the sad event of debacle of the east pakistan in 1971 is the ample proof of mishandling of issue on part of the civil and the military bureaucracy, however ascribing it to bad luck is just not fair. Thus, the lack of effectiveness and efficiency on ones part shouldn’t be ascribed to ones destiny or bad luck instead enhance ones managerial skills.
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poor examples with a wrong conclusion as the conclusion is not what the quotation wants to say
sir app ko kisi ke expansion pasand b aae hai....ager kisi ko nahi samajh aa rahi tu app khud likh de ...ta k idea n concept clear hu jay


what did you mean by dat poor examples? relevant nahi ?

sadozai and css candidtes jis tera ke exapmles de rahey they pheley woh app ko galat lag rahi then ...abbb dubara App ko sadozi ke exapmle wohi theek lag rahi hain...ACTUALLY NOW SERIOUSLY MESS UP WITH DIS STAETMENT....
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Civilized dissent is necessary for social progress

Dissent means difference of opinion which is thought to be necessary concomitant of social progress. The social development is based on people’s autonomous ideas and views. The best example of this statement is found in the western culture where people differ with each other in their national and individual point of views but still they have freedom of expression to give words of their own feelings. Democracy is one of the best forms of political system in the world. Democracy fosters judicial freedom, media freedom, and protection of human rights. People can criticize on political reforms through dissent. The social progress cannot be prevailed without oppose ideas of people.
Voltaire’s quotation says that I disapprove of what you say, but I will defend your right to say it, it is till death”. The civilized dissent opens up avenues for tolerance which is very much needed to construct a society on healthy lines. After the period of Renaissance in the west Europe, dissent emerged as a force in the fields of literature, science and art. It gave birth to romanticism as a reaction to classicism in English poetry. People’s attitudes underwent a healthy change. There was overall awakening in the west Europe. The same trend continues in the west Europe even now. Education plays key role in the process to make society advance. Educated people act positively on differences of opinions of others. They protest in less gruff manner as compare to the uneducated people. Education develops sense of receiving and mutual harmony. The education and listening of civilized dissent are linked with each other for social enhancement.
“If men of knowledge, men of power and men of wealth come together and there is no difference of opinion among them, then the society is bound to prosper”.
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From the preceding discussion, the conclusion is that a difference of opinion exists in every society and it is healthy sign of society. Only sophisticated dissent can enhance the overall prestige and progress of any society.
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kia ap logon ko lgta k jo jo mistakes main ne nikali wo theek nahi ?
mussaa, perhaps the problem is that nobody is actually grasping the meaning of those mistakes which you are pointing out, plus the people here really want you to give them a solid example of how a good expansion should be written, and that by writing an expansion not by telling them the tactics.

Infact, I also am still a bit confused about this expansion thing but am following your guidelines and will soon show a well written expansion but it will definitely be great if you explain us by solving one. (but nobody can compel you for that as we know aap ko khud kay bhi bohat kaam hongay to fight karnay kaa ya ghussa karnay ka tou simply kisi ko right hi nahi hai)

aap mistakes bilkul theek nikaal rahay hain, but the prob is aap ko meray jaisay nalaiq students ka saamna hai

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In a strategy it is important to see distant things close and take a distanced view of closed things
A strategy is indeed a plan chalked out to achieve the specific goal. A strategy varies in its nature and degree. It is designed by keeping in view the ground realities and after thorough observation of its pros and cons. It plays significant role in inter-state and intra-state relations and also in the development of the country. The failure or success of a strategy breeds widespread effects. Therefore, it is imperative that while planning a strategy its outcomes in short run and long run should be evaluated. Thus, in this regard it is important to see distant things close and the should also take a distanced view of close things.
History is replete with such example where a strategy is designed by keeping in view above tactics and proved fruitful. The truce of Hudabiya was signed between Muslims and Quresh in the sixth century. The terms and conditions laid down in the treaty were unfavorable on the part of Muslims. However, Hazart Muhammad (PBUH) accepted these harsh and difficult conditions which ultimately brought grandeur victory for Muslims. In fact it was the political acumen of Hazart Muhammad (PBUH) who viewed distant things in a closed view and close things in a broad view.
Sir Syed Ahmed Khan was a great Muslim luminary during the British rule in the Indo-Pak subcontinent. He realized the importance of education for the amelioration of the Muslims in the sub-continent. In this context, he planned a strategy to embark on the policy of acquiring western education. In this sphere, he viewed something distant as something close i.e. improvement of the downtrodden Muslims and in this regard, he took the distanced view of the close thing i.e. attainment of western education. The strategy became successful which culminated in the achievement of separate homeland for Muslims.
It in concluded that a strategy plays pivotal role in development of a country and relations among countries. Therefore, there is no denying fact that while designing a strategy it is important to see the distant thing close and take a distanced view of close things
A strategy is indeed a plan chalked out to achieve the specific goal. A strategy varies in its nature and degree. It is designed by keeping in view the ground realities and after thorough observation of its pros and cons. It plays significant role in inter-state and intra-state relations and also in the development of the country. The failure or success of a strategy breeds widespread effects. Therefore, it is imperative that while planning a strategy its outcomes in short run and long run should be evaluated. Thus, in this regard it is important to see distant things close and the should also take a distanced view of close things.
First explain the meaning of the line then the importance of the strategy.The line in the brown is not well written.And you have explained more of the importance of strategy in this paragraph not actually the way which should be adopted while making any strategy.
first example is nice and fine.
It in concluded that a strategy plays pivotal role in development of a country and relations among countries. Therefore, there is no denying fact that while designing a strategy it is important to see the distant thing close and take a distanced view of close things
poor conclusion. you have limiting the scope of strategy just to relationships of countries. It should be taken in broader sense. Write again
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sorry sir if you have mind it.do not think hum log aap se lar rahe hain is liye ke aap ne hamari mistakes nikali hain.infact we write so that we can get you comments and can improve our expansion.but if after writing two pieces we have not grasped the idea, it is responibility of a good teacher to show mistakes of students by doing it himself.phir se rone mat baith jaiye ga k we are fighting with you because if we have not grasped the meaning of expansion you also misunderstood us so hisaab barabar.
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jenny u haven't grasp the meaning of the quotation. the thing you mentioned in your expansion is that people use the lame excuse of Bad luck factor to hide their failure. but the quotation actually says that People really think that they have made their efforts but the resultant failure is due to bad luck. They don't deny the fact that they haven't made efforts.They actually think that we have made proper efforts but even then they have to face failure so its their bad luck.
They are not using bad luck as a tool to hide their poor efforts.

Complete confusion about the statement.
The First World War was the result of a badly mismanaged Balkan crisis in the summer of 1914 rather than the product of long standing rivalries between the great powers.
irrelevant example.
The recent uncontrolled flood was an outcome of mismanaged rivers but the authorities have merely termed it as an avoidable ‘natural disaster’; this confusion between the mismanagement and ill-fortune has left the masses in a state of chaos.
its not only about mismanagement.other inevitable factors also contributed to the cause.
when the father let the cat out of the bag,
not properly used idiom.
The deplorable ‘art’ of confusing mismanagement with bad luck is a learned behavior which a child learns from his elders and till the same child grows up into a ‘potentially’ responsible citizen, this becomes his second nature. This collective behavior can lead to the chaos in a society. Hence, people should make efforts not to confuse the mismanaged cases with bad luck to avoid occurrence of potential chaos in the society.
again the same wrong meaning that u deduced out of the quotation.

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1)its not about the knowledge of skills its about management of skills.
2)you have written expansion about PEOPLE OVER DEPEND ON THEIR LUCK AND UNDERESTIMATE THEIR SKILLS.
a complete mess of the topics. write again.
Roger that mussa! Thank u for using colorful markers for pointing put my mistakes Jen! Ok! I thought I meant the same thing about the idea but couldn't depict it that way maybe! Thanks alot take care
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