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zareenkhan Saturday, June 04, 2011 11:27 AM

Evaluate: Child is the father of man.
 
This adage means that the attitudes of the adults commensurate with the qualities of their childhood. An honest man is the product of upbringing of an honest child, while a stubborn child, on the other hand, will develop his personality accordingly. Therefore, the personality traits of an individual become visible during his early age.

Generally, all the adults develop their personal attributes in conformity to their childhood attributes. If the child possesses the characteristics of love and kindness, it will surely bring up a peaceful adult within him. Hazrat Halima, for example, bears testimony to the fact that Prophet Muhammad (peace be upon him) had been very kind and generous during his childhood. Later days, he became the liberator of humanity. Similarly, Picasso, the great artiste, manifested the artistic character during his childhood so much, that his master claimed that he would be surpassed by the young lad. On the contrary, Adolf Hitler harboured a stubborn child within him during his early age. Consequently, he became one of the most cruel man the world has ever seen. Thus, the child reveals its future as an adult.

However, some of the people do not develop their personalities in accordance with their childhood attitudes. Issac Newton and Albert Einstein provide such examples who, unlike their adulthood, were below par at learning during childhood. Yet, the personalities of a great majority of people are shaped in concordance with their childhood qualities. It is, therefore, suggested that the grooming of a child must receive special attention. A great deal of care must be taken in its upbringing so that it may become an invaluable asset to the people.

Natiq Saturday, June 04, 2011 07:56 PM

This adage means that the attitudes of the adults commensurate with the qualities of their childhood. An honest man is the product of upbringing of an honest child, while a stubborn child, on the other hand, will develop his personality accordingly [B]("on the other hand" sounds redundant after "while"). [/B]Therefore, the personality traits of an individual become visible during his early age.

Generally, all the adults develop their personal attributes in conformity to their childhood attributes. If the child possesses the characteristics of love and kindness, it will surely bring up a peaceful adult within him. Hazrat Halima, for example, bears testimony to the fact that Prophet Muhammad (peace be upon him) had been very kind and generous during his childhood. [B]In the [/B]later [B]years[/B], he became the liberator of humanity. Similarly, Picasso, the great [B]artist [I](artiste is performer)[/I][/B], manifested the artistic character during his childhood so [B]strongly[/B], that his master claimed that he would be surpassed by the young lad. On the contrary, Adolf Hitler harboured a stubborn child within him during his early age. Consequently, he became one of the most cruel [B]men[/B] the world has ever seen. Thus, the child reveals its future as an adult.

However, some of the people do not develop their personalities in accordance with their childhood attitudes. Issac Newton and Albert Einstein provide such examples who, unlike their adulthood, were below par at learning during childhood. Yet, the personalities of a great majority of people are shaped in concordance with their childhood qualities. It is, therefore, suggested that the grooming of a child must receive special attention. A great deal of care must be taken in its upbringing so that it may become an invaluable asset to the people.

Scorpion86 Tuesday, June 07, 2011 05:21 PM

Doesn't the title mean that child carries forward the legacy of his father? i.e the new or coming generation holds the key to the future of mankind?

Suzane Khan Tuesday, June 07, 2011 05:27 PM

precede
 
A child precede a man in the world.

zareenkhan Tuesday, June 07, 2011 05:31 PM

[QUOTE=Scorpion86;316739]Doesn't the title mean that child carries forward the legacy of his father? i.e the new or coming generation holds the key to the future of mankind?[/QUOTE]

The legacy starts from the child as per this adage. The child carries forward his own legacy and manifests it in its adulthood. He is not the father whose legacy is to be continued, rather a child continues its own legacy. Put simply, it means the child predicts its own future.

Scorpion86 Tuesday, June 07, 2011 05:42 PM

[QUOTE=zareenkhan;316745]The legacy starts from the child as per this adage. The child carries forward his own legacy and manifests it in its adulthood. He is not the father whose legacy is to be continued, rather a child continues its own legacy. Put simply, it means the child predicts its own future.[/QUOTE]

Any authentic source where the info can be checked?

zareenkhan Tuesday, June 07, 2011 08:00 PM

[QUOTE=Scorpion86;316751]Any authentic source where the info can be checked?[/QUOTE]

It is an idea, Scorpio. It can be expanded from a number of angles. My ideas may vary from yours. So is the case with everyone. Its justification is judged by the gravity of arguments given in favour or against the idea.

Muhammad T S Awan Tuesday, June 07, 2011 08:27 PM

AoA

Its a good effort.

Nevertheless, kindly keep a thing in mind that you will primarily be asked to write a paragraph on this caption and a paragraph means one paragraph (concise and sentences interlinkes with each other). Therefore you should try to gather its differnt points in one paragraph having cohesion of sentences and ideas.

Stay blessed.

zareenkhan Tuesday, June 07, 2011 10:35 PM

[QUOTE=Muhammad T S Awan;316858]AoA

Its a good effort.

Nevertheless, kindly keep a thing in mind that you will primarily be asked to write a paragraph on this caption and a paragraph means one paragraph (concise and sentences interlinkes with each other). Therefore you should try to gather its differnt points in one paragraph having cohesion of sentences and ideas.

Stay blessed.[/QUOTE]

Aaaaaaannnnnnnnnn ahaaaan ahaaaan.....:cry
koi kah raha hai ek para likho, koi kahta hai 3 likho, koi kahta hai no hard and fast rule...:cry
maine nhn karni hai koi tayari... hato ji... menu jan do... :cry

Natiq Tuesday, June 07, 2011 11:04 PM

[QUOTE=zareenkhan;316891]Aaaaaaannnnnnnnnn ahaaaan ahaaaan.....:cry
koi kah raha hai ek para likho, koi kahta hai 3 likho, koi kahta hai no hard and fast rule...:cry
maine nhn karni hai koi tayari... hato ji... menu jan do... :cry[/QUOTE]

The question statement in the paper appears as:

[I]=> Write a comprehensive [B]note[/B] (250—300 words) on any ONE of the following.[/I]

"Note" can consist of one paragraph, or more than one. A note is not necessarily [I]only one[/I] paragraph, most definitely. You wrote perfectly fine, as far as the syntax is concerned.


This is one of the reasons I asked you about the teacher.


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