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Default "HoNesty IS thE BeSt PolIcy" "CHeck My Points Seniors"

Honesty never aPpears from One's persoanlity, but is noted In offices, HOmes, friendship. HOesty means "Purity of Heart", Nothing such Procrastination should be in Mind. HOnesty has its value and weightage. It is One of the Most Important weaPon in anY society. Its Importance cannot be humiliated by deceiving to others.
Honesty is the most convincing element everywhere. It has No Horns to know honesty but work can show honesty of a man. Once we created habit of honesty by leaving nepotism, relationship mania and other factors that are involved in socities then we can be a man of value for that place.
It is observed that honesty has been vanishing by creating hand-made functions like; corruption in offices, Jealousy in friendship, evil-doer in homes have derailed system of HOnesty.
If we now roll our eye-sight to the history then we observe the pRominent Personalitites iN the world were really Laudable. The Leaders who delievered lesson of honesty earned their name everywhere. tHose leaders who sacrified for the sake of Pulbic now are deserving salute from nations. tHose are remembered with golden words who did their best to give an excellent lessons of honesty.
If we take example of our country, it also gave birth to those leaders who shone their names like; Quaid--i-Azam MOhammad Ali Jinnah, Allama Iqbal And Sir Sayed Ahmed Khan and other leaders struggle is InevitAble.
Now Our Holy Prophet's HOnesty In historic perspective is Unforgettable. Muslims and Jews use to collect their Jwellery to HaZrat Mohammad (S.A.W.S), because his HOnesty had earned such a name in Makkah and Madina, thought, they were hindus and used to worship of idols. so It can be said by these techniques by the great leaders we can change ourselves and societies by applying HOnesty everwhere.
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Good effort

But your ideas are scattered, not giving clear meaning.
See, there is ambiguity in the very first line.

*Honesty never aPpears from One's persoanlity, but is noted In offices, HOmes, friendship.*

I am understanding what you wanna say but, you are unable to express your idea fully.
And, Don't tell Examiner, WHAT IS HONESTY. By repeating it again and again.
He knows better than you.
In an expansion you have to
Introduce the Topic,
Give a Thesis statement.
Elaborate,
Elucidate,
Decorate with Examples
Conclusion.
And, Most important Quotations.

Anyways, Good Luck.
You have an ability to write
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ThaEnx for encouraging. yeah me tryIng my level best to write clearly up-to-mark. How to do Arrangement of Ideas? suGgeSt
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ThaEnx for encouraging. yeah me tryIng my level best to write clearly up-to-mark. How to do Arrangement of Ideas? suGgeSt

In a nutshell,

Practice makes a man Perfect

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Avoid 'net speak' and write in proper language otherwise forum administration would take an action against you !
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sorry Inshallah I will write in proper language. So what about writing? should it be On the daILy basis?
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sorry Inshallah I will write in proper language. So what about writing? should it be On the daILy basis?

Write whenever you FEEL like writing !
Because you cannot write without an active, ready and an eloquent mind.
So, There is no hard and fast rule.
But its Better to write 1 Expansion daily
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Well dear
You are going well. you possess knowledge and keen to express it your words. However, you need to practice a lot in order to add beauty to your writings. Define honesty first, then proceed in explaining your point in an extensive and illustrative ways. More importantly, you need to cite examples so make your language colorful and graceful.

Above all I hope and quite sure that you will do it.

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