Face expresses thoughts of mind. It is a mirror through which we can understand expressions of face. whenever I read books my colleagues can judge me whether the book I am reading is happy or gloomy. It is a natural thing when a person reads any happy book he tries to express himself in happiness but a sad book can express thoughts sadness.
There are as plentiful as blackbarries ways of expression that has been seen in children, Young and an old man. Children can never hide his emotion but a young one can hide his thoughts in critical circumstances. Old man expression will be also completely different from young and children. I remember a scene in piccadily when two lovers were going arm in arm and billing and cooing each other as they were upon the desert island of robinson crusoe, entirely oblivious of the rest of the world. school boys can read each one thoughts like a book.
A good story has come from the first world war 1914-1918. Two men were facing machine-gun fire and the face of one was pale. The other said "you are afraid." The first man replied "yes, I am. But if you were half as afraid as I am you would have run away." This shows that the face is not always a good index of the mind. sometimes when we go to some one to ask for a favour and he receives us stonily and says, "I will see what I can do about it" we wish his face showed more of his thoughts.

Improvement is reflecting through some lines. But still more and more practice is needed.

Thesis statement is still missing, you are confusing the examiner (Gussa aa jana hai usyyyy )

Write in paragraphs.
You are still not following what I 've asked you to do in your previous post.
Its a good chunk of writing but not a precise one.
Read extensively' articles, essays, short stories.
Theses things will tell you the writing pattern.
Keep Writing & surely you are going to germinate good seeds for fruitful trees.
Good Luck !

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Yeah I need more and more practice. soon you will see Improvement.

I think you should first arrange your thoughts and start writing them one by one in a flow.

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@sister mahvish shahid please comprehend me thesis statement in detail?

Thesis statement should be comprised of

Your topic on which you are going to give your views, against or favor.
Touchstone of your topic.

For instance.

Face is the mirror, in which you can see the reflection of one's personality traits, along with emotions, feelings and even thinking patterns can easily be traced out effectively.

P.S
(I 've good piece of writing regarding thesis statement, let me be free from exams shall post here Insha-Allah. )

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Originally Posted by css2013 Yeah I need more and more practice. soon you will see Improvement.

INSHA-ALLAH !

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The thing always happens that you really believe in; and the belief in a thing makes it happen.

Sister whenever you be free then post in detail about it or Just mail that piece of writing. It will be better to ameliorate my writing skill.